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7/18/2011 c3 12LeahKeehl13
Ok that was really funny :D Really really really funny! I love ron in this so much... he is the only one in the world who would try a killin curse on a noodle package. ^.^ Update soon!
7/18/2011 c3 5Lady Ice214
Nice. Your deadline is now in a week. That's plenty of time for a new chapter right? Anyway, Ron would mess that up. And for the record he's an idiot for trusting his brothers. But anyway it's hilarious and I cant wait for Hermione's reaction to the lines.

BTW. Check out Lomonaaeren. She writes Draco/Harry stories which I don't support but the phycology of them is amazing. I love the complexity. She's my new favorite.
7/18/2011 c3 15beifonglover
I hope Hermione finds that piece of paper and burns it to oblivion! Oh Ron, when will he learn to not trust the twins!

Please update soon.
7/18/2011 c3 Faye
Heey.

This sory is soo awesomee!

I love Hermione and Ron they are so

adorable! Please update soon,

i cant wait for the next chapter!
7/18/2011 c3 candice21
loved it!

please update soon!
7/17/2011 c3 parksandmckinnon
If you want a line that he doesn't know what it means there's:Are you busy tonight at 3:00 A.M.? and for a cheesy over-used one there's:Do you come here often?UPDATE! 3 :D
6/6/2011 c2 5Lady Ice214
Tee hee. Loved it. By the way what ever happened to your other stories? Aaaaannnnyyyway... What was I saying? Oh yeah. Halarious. Afterall in the land of fanfic Fred never died and the two twins are great together. Cheezy pick up lines. None come to mind but I'll provably come up with a great one right after I'll send this in. By the way, ask lady fire. I'm pretty sure she's got some really stupid ones.
3/20/2011 c2 randim person
love this too funny
2/20/2011 c2 Potterpeople
Hi i thought it was really good and i found it hilarious too.I totally understood that line and couldn't stop laughing myself. A friend told me a few stupid cheesy chat up lines which i found funny:

Can I take your picture? (Why?) Because I want Santa to know exactly what I want for Christmas.

God must have been in a very good mood the day we met.

Hey, kitten. How about spending some of your nine lives with me?

Do you believe in Santa Claus? Do you think that if I am good, he'll put you in my stocking this year?

Hey, you must be a broom, cause you just swept me off my feet.

I think I can die happy now, cause I've just seen a piece of heaven.

Excuse me, I just noticed you noticing me and I just wanted to give you notice that I noticed you too.

Do you have a plaster?, i hurt my knee falling for you.

If beauty were time, you'd be eternity.

im sorry some of these suck but well thats what makes them so cheesy. lol.
1/29/2011 c1 Taegycats2000
haha I found your story that you WOULDN'T tell me what it's called because you said it sucked but now i typed in what i thought you were called and now i can read your story and just so you know it does not suck and i know you are my sister Tatiana because i was reading this story one night in your bed so you can't say your not

plus you said you like pomagranets and the big green chair in our family room is where you always sit

haha ron triped up a step

I'm having a fit of laughter HELP

just so you know i'm writing this while your at your sleding birthday party

well on to chapter 2
1/7/2011 c2 Ron'Hermione'F'and'A
i really like the story, unfortunately i have no chessy pick up lines, only very very dirty onesss:)
1/7/2011 c2 katiya
roses are red, violets are blue,nerds are sweet and so are you?

what about that?
1/6/2011 c2 56waterbaby134
Oh poor Ron! What a horrible way to begin his quest for Hermione's love! (Though I have to admit, that line made me laugh too) You'd think he'd have learned by now, to take everything F & G tell him with a grain of salt, especially since it was addressed to a 'blundering idiot.' Lol.

More soon?
1/6/2011 c1 12LeahKeehl13
*pokes* hi! This is really funny...who doesn't love fred and George? Retorical question ;) please continue this!
1/6/2011 c1 56waterbaby134
Who doesn't love Fred and George? They're awesome. And if anybody is going to give 'ickle Ronniekins' a prod towards winning the woman of his dreams, it's going to be them, (though they'll make sure to embarrass him as much as possible on the way.)

I like the way this story is heading, and I look forward to reading more.
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