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6/10/2015 c1 8579
Wonderful story. Love the way Yoruichi teased Byakuya and how he still cared for her. There's plenty of humour to go by through the interaction from Kisuke, Yoruichi and Kuukaku.
2/21/2014 c1 randomlittleme
Haha funny story!
6/26/2013 c1 2elebelly
Wish there was more of this pairing out there! Loved it :) xXx
1/11/2013 c1 6SilverThornz
ohhh goodnesss! i likey
6/27/2012 c1 63BiblioMatsuri
Um, I know it's just random trivia but the twins' names are Koganehiko and Shiroganehiko.
8/9/2011 c1 6katiegirl101199
This was very well written, I really liked it. It was a simple plot, yet carried out with finesse. I adore the interaction between Yoruichi and Byakuya- Their sexual tension is so hilarious and cute. ;) Great work!

-Katie
2/18/2011 c1 38Cal reflector
Byakuya's outburst revealing how much Yoruichi meant to him was genuinely touching. The idea of having Yoruichi try to catch Byakuya is novel as well.
1/11/2011 c1 74wayward-river
I enjoyed this and I think you captured the characters quite well. My only nitpick is the slang. It really brings me out of the story. I'd also like to point out that in Edo-era Japan, they didn't have muffins or pasta; that was another thing that brought me out of the setting.

Other than that, I really liked this and it's a shame you didn't get to the smut =P
1/7/2011 c1 32Hasty
Now I've got a picture of Zaphod Beeblebrox tearing around the Bleach Universe. Scarring. This was hilarious, and I could totally see it happening in cannon. Although Soi Fong's probably going to kill Byakuya. A few minor errors, but definitely one for the favorites list.
1/7/2011 c1 74Lixie Lorn
I like. xD

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1/7/2011 c1 Magicbullet
this was very nice indeed, made me laugh a lot and noticed some creative use of vocabulary, you should continue, much inspiration to you!
1/7/2011 c1 blackrozegirl
Wow that was awesome, I loved it. Great story!
1/6/2011 c1 blackrozegirl
Wow that was awesome, I loved it. Great story!

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