
4/5/2021 c25 Hopeful1
I sure wish u had finished this beautiful story. I will wait eagerly for an update and hope u r ok.
I sure wish u had finished this beautiful story. I will wait eagerly for an update and hope u r ok.
3/26/2021 c25 Anita
Great story, thank you.
Great story, thank you.
2/26/2021 c25 Guest
I love this story so much have read it over and over
I'm sure you get asked this a lot but any chance you might update it ?
I love this story so much have read it over and over
I'm sure you get asked this a lot but any chance you might update it ?
2/21/2021 c25 Luscious'Golden'Locks
I stayed up until 7:30 in the morning reading this. I can’t even begin to describe the way my emotions bounced around while reading this. This whole story is so precious. I don’t know how to say how grateful I am for finding this. I’m not a crier, I don’t normally cry at anything (good or bad) but I found myself shedding tears more at this book than I did for the entirety of last year. Some were scared tears as I pictured the break in or sad tears to the description of how losing that little drawing of the cathedral made Bella feel but most of all, they were happy tears. Growing up in a situation like Bella, to have her come to realize just a little bit of her worth and see such a big growth in her self confidence and image of herself, it means more to me than I think I could ever describe. Between those tears and the tears from laughing so hard, this book is perfect. The little moments stolen between the two mean so much to me. I don’t normally read books about Edward because I’m not his biggest fan but this was so wonderfully brilliant and beautiful that I regret not looking for books about him sooner. I can wholeheartedly understand why this book is so highly reviewed and followed. As I was about ten chapters in, I started to fear that this story wasn’t finished and when I found it wasn’t, I was almost afraid to keep reading. I didn’t know if I would have the heart to tear myself away knowing Bella and Edward’s story isn’t finished. I honestly could beg. I would write a 10 page review for every chapter, I’d write a poem for every single character mentioned in the book, i would sell my left foot, heck, both of my feet, to have the rest of this story. I know the world is a mess at the moment and life gets hard, but I pray and hope that one day you’ll find yourself back here. Finding some sort of muse to finish their story. It’s so beautiful and deserves to be shared with the world. I never understood it until now, but I truly understand fifty shades of grey and after. I would love nothing more than to see you change the character names and publish this. I very (biggish) selfish part of me wants to keep this hidden because it is such a gem and people have a way of ruining some of the nicest things, but honestly a bigger part of me feels selfish from having read this and not being able to share it with the world. Your words deserve to be seen and cherished and loved by every single soul on this earth. I have never been happier when reading a book. I pray you find yourself back here, and until then, I will reread the first 25 chapters over and over again. Thank you for writing this, putting your heart and soul into this, and for sharing it with us. I am truly honored to have been granted the chance to read this. From the bottom of my heart, thank you. Until next time xoxo
I stayed up until 7:30 in the morning reading this. I can’t even begin to describe the way my emotions bounced around while reading this. This whole story is so precious. I don’t know how to say how grateful I am for finding this. I’m not a crier, I don’t normally cry at anything (good or bad) but I found myself shedding tears more at this book than I did for the entirety of last year. Some were scared tears as I pictured the break in or sad tears to the description of how losing that little drawing of the cathedral made Bella feel but most of all, they were happy tears. Growing up in a situation like Bella, to have her come to realize just a little bit of her worth and see such a big growth in her self confidence and image of herself, it means more to me than I think I could ever describe. Between those tears and the tears from laughing so hard, this book is perfect. The little moments stolen between the two mean so much to me. I don’t normally read books about Edward because I’m not his biggest fan but this was so wonderfully brilliant and beautiful that I regret not looking for books about him sooner. I can wholeheartedly understand why this book is so highly reviewed and followed. As I was about ten chapters in, I started to fear that this story wasn’t finished and when I found it wasn’t, I was almost afraid to keep reading. I didn’t know if I would have the heart to tear myself away knowing Bella and Edward’s story isn’t finished. I honestly could beg. I would write a 10 page review for every chapter, I’d write a poem for every single character mentioned in the book, i would sell my left foot, heck, both of my feet, to have the rest of this story. I know the world is a mess at the moment and life gets hard, but I pray and hope that one day you’ll find yourself back here. Finding some sort of muse to finish their story. It’s so beautiful and deserves to be shared with the world. I never understood it until now, but I truly understand fifty shades of grey and after. I would love nothing more than to see you change the character names and publish this. I very (biggish) selfish part of me wants to keep this hidden because it is such a gem and people have a way of ruining some of the nicest things, but honestly a bigger part of me feels selfish from having read this and not being able to share it with the world. Your words deserve to be seen and cherished and loved by every single soul on this earth. I have never been happier when reading a book. I pray you find yourself back here, and until then, I will reread the first 25 chapters over and over again. Thank you for writing this, putting your heart and soul into this, and for sharing it with us. I am truly honored to have been granted the chance to read this. From the bottom of my heart, thank you. Until next time xoxo
2/16/2021 c25 Obsessedreader83
Hands down one of the best fanfics I've ever read! Not sure why I only came across it now but am definitely glad I did. I would've loved more of the story but it feels a little greedy with the long generous 25 chapters, all very well written and hard to put down. Thankyou for writing and for sharing this much. LOVED IT!
Hands down one of the best fanfics I've ever read! Not sure why I only came across it now but am definitely glad I did. I would've loved more of the story but it feels a little greedy with the long generous 25 chapters, all very well written and hard to put down. Thankyou for writing and for sharing this much. LOVED IT!
2/10/2021 c25 Cme074
One of my favorites to re-read when I need to be uplifted. Since you have not posted an update in a few years, I hope you and your family are safe and well. I also hope that other users’ comments/messages have not kept you from finishing this delightful story. You are a fantastic writer. Also, if you have published any books under a pen name (not in relation to this story), I would love to read some more of your work. I hope you are having a blessed day!
One of my favorites to re-read when I need to be uplifted. Since you have not posted an update in a few years, I hope you and your family are safe and well. I also hope that other users’ comments/messages have not kept you from finishing this delightful story. You are a fantastic writer. Also, if you have published any books under a pen name (not in relation to this story), I would love to read some more of your work. I hope you are having a blessed day!
2/10/2021 c25
4Twinsmom
First time reading this and its really good. I love how you let them take their time to get to know each other. I love that Bella accepted his love at the end but didn’t say it back. I hope you get inspired to do some more chapters.
I’d love to see Rose either come to her senses or for Emmett to divorce her. You did set up that nice interest with Siobhan to tease us. Carlisle needs to be in jail along with Wilkes. Maybe Esme could be a bit happier once she’s free from him. She at least seems like she could be redeemable. I’d love to read about Bella knowing she’s capable of love and telling Edward. And then finishing school and maybe starting a family down the road. So much left to tell. Thanks for writing! I’m glad the Facebook group at No Rules Twilight talk me in to reading it anyway. ️️️

First time reading this and its really good. I love how you let them take their time to get to know each other. I love that Bella accepted his love at the end but didn’t say it back. I hope you get inspired to do some more chapters.
I’d love to see Rose either come to her senses or for Emmett to divorce her. You did set up that nice interest with Siobhan to tease us. Carlisle needs to be in jail along with Wilkes. Maybe Esme could be a bit happier once she’s free from him. She at least seems like she could be redeemable. I’d love to read about Bella knowing she’s capable of love and telling Edward. And then finishing school and maybe starting a family down the road. So much left to tell. Thanks for writing! I’m glad the Facebook group at No Rules Twilight talk me in to reading it anyway. ️️️
2/7/2021 c25 Guest
I dont even speak english right and im here completely drawn in thus story, so please give me the happy ending, im beggin
I dont even speak english right and im here completely drawn in thus story, so please give me the happy ending, im beggin
2/3/2021 c4 Xxx
This is a little too cliche por moi appetité !
This is a little too cliche por moi appetité !
1/31/2021 c25 Guest
Very good
Very good