for Heirs of the Ancients: Search for Time11/13/2015 c20 loloree
I found this story yesterday. I couldn't put it down! I just finished reading it. WONDERFULLY WRITTEN! I sure hope the next one is as good or better! Thank you for all the time and effort you put in to this!
I found this story yesterday. I couldn't put it down! I just finished reading it. WONDERFULLY WRITTEN! I sure hope the next one is as good or better! Thank you for all the time and effort you put in to this!
7/11/2012 c13 
2Cary11
I'm confused does Krys actually want to help Kronos or is this just part of her plan?
2Cary11I'm confused does Krys actually want to help Kronos or is this just part of her plan?
7/7/2012 c3 Guest
Brook is lieing about here lynige perch and anabeth are here paerents
Brook is lieing about here lynige perch and anabeth are here paerents
7/3/2012 c20 theactress44
Oh my gods. This is amazing! Ha, well maybe that's a bit late, but I just found this story and read the whole thing. You are a FANTASTIC writer! Please make a sequel soon! I will review every chapter, because you should have had WAY more reviews. Just saying :)
Oh my gods. This is amazing! Ha, well maybe that's a bit late, but I just found this story and read the whole thing. You are a FANTASTIC writer! Please make a sequel soon! I will review every chapter, because you should have had WAY more reviews. Just saying :)
6/30/2012 c20 1Bosque95
You certainly do not disappoint! I took a somewhat forced break from (my iPod, with all my bookmarks, was dead), and then I return to find one of my favorite stories has been finished! Good job! I wish I had dedication to my story... Anyway, I teared up a bit at Nick's "death", so you did well. Can't wait for the sequel.
1Bosque95You certainly do not disappoint! I took a somewhat forced break from (my iPod, with all my bookmarks, was dead), and then I return to find one of my favorite stories has been finished! Good job! I wish I had dedication to my story... Anyway, I teared up a bit at Nick's "death", so you did well. Can't wait for the sequel.
6/16/2012 c20 Maerad-of-Pellinor28
I feel stupid for the review I left all those chapters ago I can't keep characters straight when so many are introduced at once.
Anyway the story is amazing. I didn't review very chapter like I should have because it means it would have taken me longer to read and finish the story.
I was a bit surprised the half-bloods didn't get Hermes to deliver the supplies to the other camp.
Anyway like I said it was amazing and I can't wait to start the sequel.
I feel stupid for the review I left all those chapters ago I can't keep characters straight when so many are introduced at once.
Anyway the story is amazing. I didn't review very chapter like I should have because it means it would have taken me longer to read and finish the story.
I was a bit surprised the half-bloods didn't get Hermes to deliver the supplies to the other camp.
Anyway like I said it was amazing and I can't wait to start the sequel.
6/13/2012 c20 Olo Eopia03
I did it! I'm going to plow through ur sequel nowwwww! Good first book :DDDD I like it and can't wait what will happen next :O
-Olo Eopia03
I did it! I'm going to plow through ur sequel nowwwww! Good first book :DDDD I like it and can't wait what will happen next :O
-Olo Eopia03
6/11/2012 c12 Olo Eopia03
It's starting to get better and better :D
I'm so sorry I'm reviewing so late :O
There are a little errors though on the grammar and spelling side :)
Keep writing :O
-Olo Eopia03
It's starting to get better and better :D
I'm so sorry I'm reviewing so late :O
There are a little errors though on the grammar and spelling side :)
Keep writing :O
-Olo Eopia03
6/11/2012 c10 Olo Eopia03
Hiiii :)) It's me again! Please don't stop! I'm still reading :DD
My favorite character is Brooke :)
Hiiii :)) It's me again! Please don't stop! I'm still reading :DD
My favorite character is Brooke :)
6/11/2012 c4 1UniquelyMe12
Wow this is an amazing story so far. It's kind of funny to me because my name is Brooke and I'm not used to seeing people named Brooke unless my friend is talking to me over an email. Plus he fct that I have a step-brother named Alex. Just seems a bit weird.
Other than that the story is amazing and fun :)
1UniquelyMe12Wow this is an amazing story so far. It's kind of funny to me because my name is Brooke and I'm not used to seeing people named Brooke unless my friend is talking to me over an email. Plus he fct that I have a step-brother named Alex. Just seems a bit weird.
Other than that the story is amazing and fun :)
6/9/2012 c6 Olo Eopia03
KEEP GOING! :DDDD i really wanna read that new chapter in your sequel, but
i'm only on chapter 8 :3 woopsies :D
I like it! I like how its long and you take the writing very seriously. You have
very few errors in grammar and spelling too :))))) hi :D
-Olo Eopia03
KEEP GOING! :DDDD i really wanna read that new chapter in your sequel, but
i'm only on chapter 8 :3 woopsies :D
I like it! I like how its long and you take the writing very seriously. You have
very few errors in grammar and spelling too :))))) hi :D
-Olo Eopia03
6/1/2012 c20 Quasi-forever
OMG! If I didn't know better I would think you were Riordan! This story is priceless, it does need a little better grammer and spelling but I hardly noticed most of it. This story had me vouching for everything the main charcter did. I love how expressive you are with Krystol and how realistic she and the rest of the charcters are. Please write a sequel I love this story so much and I will follow it the entire way.
OMG! If I didn't know better I would think you were Riordan! This story is priceless, it does need a little better grammer and spelling but I hardly noticed most of it. This story had me vouching for everything the main charcter did. I love how expressive you are with Krystol and how realistic she and the rest of the charcters are. Please write a sequel I love this story so much and I will follow it the entire way.