for New Beginng3/9/2011 c18 iluvpoterlostboysbreakfastclub
please update sooonnnn...i love this and yeah you do have bad spelling but everyone does so don't fret, as long as the story is put out everyones happy :)
please update sooonnnn...i love this and yeah you do have bad spelling but everyone does so don't fret, as long as the story is put out everyones happy :)
3/9/2011 c18 nightwalker1234
nice clif hanger now I want more and I like the whole I keep staring at it thinking it will move, but it never does. It makes me. I thought that was rather funny.
your sister nightwalker1234
nice clif hanger now I want more and I like the whole I keep staring at it thinking it will move, but it never does. It makes me. I thought that was rather funny.
your sister nightwalker1234
3/9/2011 c18 
1SunnySideUp25
This is amazing can't wait for more :D I'm loving how she isn't giving up love it all together :) well done
1SunnySideUp25This is amazing can't wait for more :D I'm loving how she isn't giving up love it all together :) well done
3/6/2011 c17 nightwalker1234
give me more please you'll be the best older sister I could ask for now please tell me what will happen next!
your little sister and your number one 1 fan nightwalker1234
give me more please you'll be the best older sister I could ask for now please tell me what will happen next!
your little sister and your number one 1 fan nightwalker1234
3/2/2011 c17 1SunnySideUp25
I loved it just ignore those mean people that don't like the story. I love it and think it's amazing I can't wait for more :D
1SunnySideUp25I loved it just ignore those mean people that don't like the story. I love it and think it's amazing I can't wait for more :D
3/1/2011 c17 The BlueMoon Club
Really good and I know what u mean I had a hurtful reviewer once
But its was really good I like bunnys character
:)
Really good and I know what u mean I had a hurtful reviewer once
But its was really good I like bunnys character
:)
2/22/2011 c16 nightwalker1234
sorry I haven't commented in a while but I read the two new ones and who is bunny supost to be...well nvm it dosen't matter I love the green man and the cholate part that made me laugh so hard I almost peed but I am still your number 1 fan please keep posting and I will keep reviewing
nightwalker1234
sorry I haven't commented in a while but I read the two new ones and who is bunny supost to be...well nvm it dosen't matter I love the green man and the cholate part that made me laugh so hard I almost peed but I am still your number 1 fan please keep posting and I will keep reviewing
nightwalker1234
2/22/2011 c16 1SunnySideUp25
This is amazing I love this story so much :) I like how she is falling in love with David but I love how she doesn't go leaping in to his arms and fights back :D keep up the good work can't wait for more :)
1SunnySideUp25This is amazing I love this story so much :) I like how she is falling in love with David but I love how she doesn't go leaping in to his arms and fights back :D keep up the good work can't wait for more :)
2/21/2011 c16 1funkyfloral
wow i apologise for now reviewing!
ive caught up now (:
love how the story is going! great job!
&& got to say i loved this bit;
"as the waves pulled in and then returned to the ocean once more. As this action cautioned I couldn't help but think that this is how David's and mine relationship was like. We were the ocean, no matter how many times we pulled away from each other we always ended up back into each others arms"
bloody brilliant!
keep up the good work
(:
1funkyfloralwow i apologise for now reviewing!
ive caught up now (:
love how the story is going! great job!
&& got to say i loved this bit;
"as the waves pulled in and then returned to the ocean once more. As this action cautioned I couldn't help but think that this is how David's and mine relationship was like. We were the ocean, no matter how many times we pulled away from each other we always ended up back into each others arms"
bloody brilliant!
keep up the good work
(:
2/20/2011 c15 Jashin worshipping Jaganist
Nice chapter,can't wait for the next. Interested to see where her friend fits in all of this
Nice chapter,can't wait for the next. Interested to see where her friend fits in all of this
2/15/2011 c14 nightwalker1234
OMG this story is so good my friend told me about it I have read all of it but this chapter was the one of the best ones yet but my favoiret one was when marco was telling star's story you speak to me I want to do a story as good as this one someday but I don't know where to start please up date soon and tell me marco gets a happy ending...your number 1 fan nightwalker1234
OMG this story is so good my friend told me about it I have read all of it but this chapter was the one of the best ones yet but my favoiret one was when marco was telling star's story you speak to me I want to do a story as good as this one someday but I don't know where to start please up date soon and tell me marco gets a happy ending...your number 1 fan nightwalker1234