for New Beginng2/7/2011 c11 Emzy2k11
nice chapter please update again soon i love how marko cares about sage its so cute
nice chapter please update again soon i love how marko cares about sage its so cute
2/7/2011 c11 
2TheSheWolf93
Two words,love it.Lol keep going,it's getting really good.I think it would be kind of cute if she got with Marko,but it's your story.I really do love it.
2TheSheWolf93Two words,love it.Lol keep going,it's getting really good.I think it would be kind of cute if she got with Marko,but it's your story.I really do love it.
2/5/2011 c10 Emzy2k11
Awww poor marko please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter so please hurry :)
Awww poor marko please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter so please hurry :)
2/2/2011 c8 Emzy2k11
Wow nice chapter please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter please hurry
Wow nice chapter please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter please hurry
1/30/2011 c6 Emzy2k11
Please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter i love this story please hurry
Please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter i love this story please hurry
1/22/2011 c5 Texas Bobcat
Woman,what's wrong with you? You didn't message me back.Alos I like it beeter now.
Woman,what's wrong with you? You didn't message me back.Alos I like it beeter now.
1/21/2011 c5 Emzy2k11
Ohhh davids jealous now thats something tha doesnt happen everyday please update soon maybe you should make it not just david who has an intrest in her but dwayne as well and paul and marko see her as a sister just a thought anyway please hurry :)
Ohhh davids jealous now thats something tha doesnt happen everyday please update soon maybe you should make it not just david who has an intrest in her but dwayne as well and paul and marko see her as a sister just a thought anyway please hurry :)
1/12/2011 c4 Texas Bobcat
First off,WHAT THE HELL YOU DIDN'T MEESAGE ME BACK!Second,I still like it.But seriesously get rid of the other characters they kinda suck(pun very much intened).Alos if your still looking for a beta I could do it.message me back.
First off,WHAT THE HELL YOU DIDN'T MEESAGE ME BACK!Second,I still like it.But seriesously get rid of the other characters they kinda suck(pun very much intened).Alos if your still looking for a beta I could do it.message me back.