for New Beginng1/12/2011 c4 
1funkyfloral
Loved last two chapters and the incident with david and the boys! Can't wait for next update (:
1funkyfloralLoved last two chapters and the incident with david and the boys! Can't wait for next update (:
1/11/2011 c2 Texas Bobcat
Okay,better than last time.But I would get rid of River,she should be the first to die if Sage becomes a vampire.Also IT NEEDS THE BOYS LIKE NOW!
Okay,better than last time.But I would get rid of River,she should be the first to die if Sage becomes a vampire.Also IT NEEDS THE BOYS LIKE NOW!
1/11/2011 c2 funkyfloral
great start!
glad i read this now!
i think you shouldn't involve star in this, keep it a david/oc
(:
great start!
glad i read this now!
i think you shouldn't involve star in this, keep it a david/oc
(:
1/11/2011 c2 5lordofthebreakdance
Keep star out. When it comes to David/OC fics, she just complicates things unnessesarily and usually ends up dying. Just saying! Good fic!
5lordofthebreakdanceKeep star out. When it comes to David/OC fics, she just complicates things unnessesarily and usually ends up dying. Just saying! Good fic!
1/9/2011 c1 29Spanish Sunrise
you live in Vegas? lucky girl. I'm from L.A...city of Angels, and you're from Sin City.
Like you cared. :)
Great Start!
29Spanish Sunriseyou live in Vegas? lucky girl. I'm from L.A...city of Angels, and you're from Sin City.
Like you cared. :)
Great Start!
1/9/2011 c1 iluvpoterlostboysbreakfastclub
i love this story! and im so happy youre going to put her with david...there both feisty, which will leave you with plent y of plot and summary to work with ;)
i love this story! and im so happy youre going to put her with david...there both feisty, which will leave you with plent y of plot and summary to work with ;)