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1/11/2011 c1 33Air-Quiet-Reader
Only fair I give the same review here ;) :P

Nice to see another peson experiment with disney lyrical manipulation! I use it quite a lot in my own story, so I appreciate it's difficulty.

You did a really good job of this, and the song fits excellently. This looks like a tough song to adapt, with some rather large words and all the crazy stuff rapid-fire at the end, so kudos on making that effort.

Improvements, as I said in the previous rendition, would be more rhyming and keeping the syllable count to match the beat better.

Other than that, excellent job.

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