for Making Memories of Us1/23/2014 c1 whiteblue2912
Goodness, this is amazing! I love how you work through so many of the different stages of their relationship but like keep the consitant and tied together! And I just love your Lily and James, aghhhh! The first kiss is probably my favorite though cause James is just too cute. Thanks for the great and super funny and beautiful story!
Goodness, this is amazing! I love how you work through so many of the different stages of their relationship but like keep the consitant and tied together! And I just love your Lily and James, aghhhh! The first kiss is probably my favorite though cause James is just too cute. Thanks for the great and super funny and beautiful story!
3/16/2013 c1 
44Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Awwww these are amazing. I loved the humour and wit in the first ones and the last ones were so moving they had me on the verge of tears xx
44Ansy Pansy aka PanzAwwww these are amazing. I loved the humour and wit in the first ones and the last ones were so moving they had me on the verge of tears xx
9/2/2011 c1 pimentoplane
Absolutely wonderful. Everything about it. The progression is heart wrenching and the desperation between Lily and James is almost tangible. Your writing style is simple but elegant and truly paints the image in my head. I'm really excited to see where this is going. Cheers!
Absolutely wonderful. Everything about it. The progression is heart wrenching and the desperation between Lily and James is almost tangible. Your writing style is simple but elegant and truly paints the image in my head. I'm really excited to see where this is going. Cheers!
1/13/2011 c1 Tina
awesome!great!wow!1111
awesome!great!wow!1111
1/12/2011 c1 FantabulousPurpleOboe
I lovveeeddddd it! You should start a story off of those! They were awesome! Good job, great writing!
I lovveeeddddd it! You should start a story off of those! They were awesome! Good job, great writing!
1/11/2011 c1 kaate51
wow.
this is the first james/lily fic i've read.
but your writing style is lovely.
it flows nicely and is quite descriptive.
you can really feel the characters emotions, and i found myself smiling with them.
the only critism i have, is why isn't there more? :)
wow.
this is the first james/lily fic i've read.
but your writing style is lovely.
it flows nicely and is quite descriptive.
you can really feel the characters emotions, and i found myself smiling with them.
the only critism i have, is why isn't there more? :)
1/11/2011 c1 lucykevinfan
Wow, I loved reading this. I cannot wait until you update. I absolutely love your writing!
Wow, I loved reading this. I cannot wait until you update. I absolutely love your writing!
1/11/2011 c1 4deathly fan
I absolutely love and adore it. You had me and tears toward the ending which is something rare that only a James/Lily fic can do to me. I love forward to reading the rest of it. Great job!
4deathly fanI absolutely love and adore it. You had me and tears toward the ending which is something rare that only a James/Lily fic can do to me. I love forward to reading the rest of it. Great job!