for The Son of Neptune8/7/2012 c1 Blackfeather
I wonder,what's test wait for him?
wait for that test! & next chap W
I wonder,what's test wait for him?
wait for that test! & next chap W
12/30/2011 c3 fasuty
I luv cliffies!
I luv cliffies!
7/4/2011 c3 cheech98
your grammar is horrible, but the story line is awesome. please dont discontinue this, it's really good, just needs a little work.
your grammar is horrible, but the story line is awesome. please dont discontinue this, it's really good, just needs a little work.
6/30/2011 c3 
4Mcat9905
I really like this one, although it's definately not what Rick Riordan would write. I'm actually impressed by the way you put your own spin on his characters. Is Halley supposed to be Hazel? Cause so far, you got all the names right except for her. or is halley a nickname? I dont know, bit i really do like it. can you please write some more? :):):):):)
4Mcat9905I really like this one, although it's definately not what Rick Riordan would write. I'm actually impressed by the way you put your own spin on his characters. Is Halley supposed to be Hazel? Cause so far, you got all the names right except for her. or is halley a nickname? I dont know, bit i really do like it. can you please write some more? :):):):):)
6/24/2011 c2 hi
Percy is supposed to lose his memory
Percy is supposed to lose his memory
6/21/2011 c3 2Doma Umaru
YA
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AWESOME!
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6/20/2011 c1 Percabeth
OMG THIS BOOK IS SO AWESOME TELL RICK RIORDAN ABOUT THIS MAN I CANT WAIT TO SEE THE REST!
GO PERCY AND ANNABETH MY 2 FAV CHARACTERS!1
OMG THIS BOOK IS SO AWESOME TELL RICK RIORDAN ABOUT THIS MAN I CANT WAIT TO SEE THE REST!
GO PERCY AND ANNABETH MY 2 FAV CHARACTERS!1
6/4/2011 c3 Guest
more write please
more write please
4/16/2011 c1 Please give this review in
Hi! I would love it if u gave put this review in the reviews for the fic a drop in the ocean-cause I don't have an account and mle199 said u need an account to review to here is the review- I love this story! An idea- maybe annabeth can kiss Percy and emily sees them and gets really angry and they are all fighting but hen they have to go on a quest toghether when there still fighting. Update?-(end of review). I would love it if u gave this review to her. If u do this u are the awesomest person! Please do this im begging you I would be too happy if you did this I will have a party! Thanks sooooo much!
Hi! I would love it if u gave put this review in the reviews for the fic a drop in the ocean-cause I don't have an account and mle199 said u need an account to review to here is the review- I love this story! An idea- maybe annabeth can kiss Percy and emily sees them and gets really angry and they are all fighting but hen they have to go on a quest toghether when there still fighting. Update?-(end of review). I would love it if u gave this review to her. If u do this u are the awesomest person! Please do this im begging you I would be too happy if you did this I will have a party! Thanks sooooo much!
4/7/2011 c1 Guest
Hey! You know those really good stories by mle199 a spark of a fire and a drop in the ocean? They are being copied by some lunatic word for word and this lunatic name flame011011 or somehing like that and she is claiming she wrote it! She called the stoy sparks of fire! Can you please tell mle199 thatcher story is being copied cause she deserves to know I love her stories so much and I hate that someone copying them! I can't tell her. Cause I don't have fanfic so I can't review on her stories pleasplease tell her! I would be soooooo happy! From emily.
Hey! You know those really good stories by mle199 a spark of a fire and a drop in the ocean? They are being copied by some lunatic word for word and this lunatic name flame011011 or somehing like that and she is claiming she wrote it! She called the stoy sparks of fire! Can you please tell mle199 thatcher story is being copied cause she deserves to know I love her stories so much and I hate that someone copying them! I can't tell her. Cause I don't have fanfic so I can't review on her stories pleasplease tell her! I would be soooooo happy! From emily.
2/21/2011 c3 slayerofnemeanlion
You should so keep doing this story and by the way just go to google translate and it can translate anything into any language. Well I hope you continue your story I'll be looking
You should so keep doing this story and by the way just go to google translate and it can translate anything into any language. Well I hope you continue your story I'll be looking