for The Son of Neptune2/19/2011 c3 
3Newbiegod35
Nice Story, it's one of the best I have read, but you need to explain why Percy has his memory and Jason doesn't. But in the story I am writing it's along the same lines and Percy is just gaining his memories faster, since Hera/Juno isn't his patron, while she is Jason's. That is my reason why Percy is getting his memories faster and maybe yours, don't know. But you are writing a pretty good story, check mine out if you want. Update Soon!
3Newbiegod35Nice Story, it's one of the best I have read, but you need to explain why Percy has his memory and Jason doesn't. But in the story I am writing it's along the same lines and Percy is just gaining his memories faster, since Hera/Juno isn't his patron, while she is Jason's. That is my reason why Percy is getting his memories faster and maybe yours, don't know. But you are writing a pretty good story, check mine out if you want. Update Soon!
2/8/2011 c3 1iamasuperhero
Write the chapter about percy's test. And I hope you'll make it fantastic! :)) Please update!
1iamasuperheroWrite the chapter about percy's test. And I hope you'll make it fantastic! :)) Please update!
2/8/2011 c2 iamasuperhero
ahh. yes. Actually, I see The Son of Neptune similarly like this. I mean, Percy not having amnesia. Anyway, this is good. :) Keep writing. And I hope there's something like percy/reyna or percy/anyone from roman camp. LOL. :)
ahh. yes. Actually, I see The Son of Neptune similarly like this. I mean, Percy not having amnesia. Anyway, this is good. :) Keep writing. And I hope there's something like percy/reyna or percy/anyone from roman camp. LOL. :)
1/24/2011 c3 Haunting Shadows
Spectacular. Amazing. Brilliant. And last but not least Marvalous. Just some words that come to mind when I read this story. I love this it is incredibly original. The way Percy remembers his past has me hooked. Please update soon yours sincerely Haunting Shadows.
Spectacular. Amazing. Brilliant. And last but not least Marvalous. Just some words that come to mind when I read this story. I love this it is incredibly original. The way Percy remembers his past has me hooked. Please update soon yours sincerely Haunting Shadows.
1/17/2011 c3 2ShoshonaRose
Really awesome story so far! How did lupa know so quickly who he was and did the other demigods have heard what she said to Percy? Please update soon! -Cassie
2ShoshonaRoseReally awesome story so far! How did lupa know so quickly who he was and did the other demigods have heard what she said to Percy? Please update soon! -Cassie
1/15/2011 c3 19Anime Princess
And WHY does Lupa hate Greeks?
I LOVE how Percy is so calm and collected and has already gotten the others annoyed by his actions.
He's a natural leader and as the saying goes...goes with the flow...and he can out fight any of the Romans with his Invalunerability so its not like he has much to worry about!
I can't wait to read more!
POST MORE ASAP!
I can't wait to see how Percy deals with Lupa and the others and his test!
Personally, I think Percy should show her exactly why he can do and if she STILL doesn't accept or like him; I think Neptune should send a massive wave that threatens to drown Lupa if she doesn't treat Percy with the respect he deserves!
POST MOER ASAP!
Love ya,
Sam
19Anime PrincessAnd WHY does Lupa hate Greeks?
I LOVE how Percy is so calm and collected and has already gotten the others annoyed by his actions.
He's a natural leader and as the saying goes...goes with the flow...and he can out fight any of the Romans with his Invalunerability so its not like he has much to worry about!
I can't wait to read more!
POST MORE ASAP!
I can't wait to see how Percy deals with Lupa and the others and his test!
Personally, I think Percy should show her exactly why he can do and if she STILL doesn't accept or like him; I think Neptune should send a massive wave that threatens to drown Lupa if she doesn't treat Percy with the respect he deserves!
POST MOER ASAP!
Love ya,
Sam
1/15/2011 c3 8lovelywik
Hmmm... I thought it was Mount Othrys, not Mount Tam. Anyways hope you post your next chapter soon :]
8lovelywikHmmm... I thought it was Mount Othrys, not Mount Tam. Anyways hope you post your next chapter soon :]
1/15/2011 c2 lovelywik
Hmmm... so are you making it as if Percy hasn;t lost any memories? That's different. :]
Hmmm... so are you making it as if Percy hasn;t lost any memories? That's different. :]
1/15/2011 c1 lovelywik
Hmmmm... I like :)
But I think it would be better if you wrote "u" in full form "you" to make it nicer. Fix up some other words like "Thou" it's be really good. :)
Hmmmm... I like :)
But I think it would be better if you wrote "u" in full form "you" to make it nicer. Fix up some other words like "Thou" it's be really good. :)
1/15/2011 c3 Colbyn
Update soon!
Update soon!
1/13/2011 c2 6pjoftw111
this is actually really good i mean legit i was abit like should i read it or not but i liked how you let percy keep his memory and everything
6pjoftw111this is actually really good i mean legit i was abit like should i read it or not but i liked how you let percy keep his memory and everything
1/13/2011 c2 19Anime Princess
I LOVE how Percy remembers everything!
I feel bad about Annabeth going through all this pain though as she looks for him.
And I LOVE the new watch! Especially how he is able to rejuvenate the power by submerging it in the water!
And Reyna is a powerful sorceress, cool!
I can't wait to read more!
POST MORE ASAP!
Love ya,
Sam
19Anime PrincessI LOVE how Percy remembers everything!
I feel bad about Annabeth going through all this pain though as she looks for him.
And I LOVE the new watch! Especially how he is able to rejuvenate the power by submerging it in the water!
And Reyna is a powerful sorceress, cool!
I can't wait to read more!
POST MORE ASAP!
Love ya,
Sam