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6/5/2011 c1 44lilgenious
Aw you have me feeling sorry for Morgana now:-( I love how you portrayed her character and how she felt when she realized what was happening.

Thank you for sharing!
6/2/2011 c1 11Angela-Bennet
It's so tragic, it's a lovely scene, you certainly portrayed the characters accurately. I find this moment more upsetting than Freya's death. I don't know why.
5/14/2011 c1 11ArodieltheElfofRohan
Oh wow. How on earth do you only have two reviews for this? It's incredibly powerful! Especially this part:

[The insistence in your eyes allows me to give into my thirst. I nod in acceptance, seeing relief flash across your features. Your concern is flattering, and it makes me smile.

"Thank you."

You give the briefest nod and watch me as though making sure I drink. You're a loyal friend, Merlin.]

Man, that's some good stuff! haha Keep up your awesome writing. ^_^
1/23/2011 c1 70Whirlwind421
*cries* That is awesome! I love hearing Morgana's thoughts...especially in that aweful aweful scene! It's intense. I like how you used first person and refered to Merlin as really works!
1/12/2011 c1 99Little Miss Novella
So bittersweet and sad. Love the repetition of being scared. Love this story :D Keep on writing :)

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