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88tenshi noyo Ryu Taiga
This was super interesting. Scary as all hell; my heart was racing, just like Layla's. I know this is super old, but it would be so interesting to see more of this. What happens to Eric? It's a true fact that police can't really do anything about stalkers. What will Layla and the others do? This has the makings of a really scary story. I wish there was more.
88tenshi noyo Ryu TaigaThis was super interesting. Scary as all hell; my heart was racing, just like Layla's. I know this is super old, but it would be so interesting to see more of this. What happens to Eric? It's a true fact that police can't really do anything about stalkers. What will Layla and the others do? This has the makings of a really scary story. I wish there was more.
9/5/2016 c1 Tessa
I really liked your story and I think you did a great job. I think Layla's reaction was quite realistic, as I was in a similar (though less creepy) situation recently. I was in a psych hospital, and there was this really creepy guy in the room next to me. A day after he was admitted, he started going into other people's bedroom, even though that wasn't allowed. I was on leave and came back to find some of the things in my room had been moved. Later on that night, he kept on opening my door while I was in there and watching me. I eventually got the nurses to the lock the door but every ten minutes or so he would rattle the door knob. I was terrified. I felt sick for hours and couldn't sleep. All I could think about was what he might have done the night before. I'm a heavy sleeper, so he could have come into my bedroom and done almost anything to me or my I was reading this fic, I felt like I could empathize with Layla.
Sorry for the weird anecdote. Feel free to ignore it.
I really liked your story and I think you did a great job. I think Layla's reaction was quite realistic, as I was in a similar (though less creepy) situation recently. I was in a psych hospital, and there was this really creepy guy in the room next to me. A day after he was admitted, he started going into other people's bedroom, even though that wasn't allowed. I was on leave and came back to find some of the things in my room had been moved. Later on that night, he kept on opening my door while I was in there and watching me. I eventually got the nurses to the lock the door but every ten minutes or so he would rattle the door knob. I was terrified. I felt sick for hours and couldn't sleep. All I could think about was what he might have done the night before. I'm a heavy sleeper, so he could have come into my bedroom and done almost anything to me or my I was reading this fic, I felt like I could empathize with Layla.
Sorry for the weird anecdote. Feel free to ignore it.
1/26/2014 c1 Guest
Good job
Good job
9/27/2013 c1 4Catharmel
Kudos. No, I thought she seemed pretty realistic, and was able to keep calm and incapacitate him. Nice work.
4CatharmelKudos. No, I thought she seemed pretty realistic, and was able to keep calm and incapacitate him. Nice work.
9/15/2012 c1 Guest
that was good you should continue it
that was good you should continue it
8/6/2012 c1 21abandonedaccount451
heheheh wait
WHAT!
STALKER STALKER
DEAR GOD GET YOUR GUNS
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AND YOUR WARRENS
THEY'LL PROTECT YOU
P,S GREAT STORY
21abandonedaccount451heheheh wait
WHAT!
STALKER STALKER
DEAR GOD GET YOUR GUNS
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.
AND YOUR WARRENS
THEY'LL PROTECT YOU
P,S GREAT STORY
5/28/2012 c1 10DeathByTorchwood
This was nice but there were some errors. Like, you used "principle" instead of "principal." I suggest running it through a spell check.
10DeathByTorchwoodThis was nice but there were some errors. Like, you used "principle" instead of "principal." I suggest running it through a spell check.
4/29/2012 c1 6Yamibara
I really like this story and this is perfect of why, Edward from Twilight is creepy, it's not romantic or noble to break and enter my home just to watch me sleep. It's crime and you're stalker. I really enjoyed how upset everyone was and their characters concern. I wish there was more, but it's a one shot XD Great Job.
6YamibaraI really like this story and this is perfect of why, Edward from Twilight is creepy, it's not romantic or noble to break and enter my home just to watch me sleep. It's crime and you're stalker. I really enjoyed how upset everyone was and their characters concern. I wish there was more, but it's a one shot XD Great Job.
3/26/2012 c1 Bella
Awww Warren is so protective it cute oh I need to know what happens
Awww Warren is so protective it cute oh I need to know what happens
1/29/2012 c1 Cyd the Squid
I really liked the story. I'd love to see a sequel to see how Eric is dealt with.
I really liked the story. I'd love to see a sequel to see how Eric is dealt with.
7/14/2011 c1 angie
make more ! i love it ! it was amazing ! it would be awesome if he kidnappe layla and then warren kick his ass XD yeah
make more ! i love it ! it was amazing ! it would be awesome if he kidnappe layla and then warren kick his ass XD yeah
6/13/2011 c1 HannaDee1616
Heyy! Soo this fanfiction might be the best one on Warren and Layla that I have read so far...I love that you went with something completely off of imagination rather than just rewriting the story so that Layla and Warren end up together. (This happens a lot, and theyre still good but not nearly as creative.) Good Job! Keep up the good work!
Heyy! Soo this fanfiction might be the best one on Warren and Layla that I have read so far...I love that you went with something completely off of imagination rather than just rewriting the story so that Layla and Warren end up together. (This happens a lot, and theyre still good but not nearly as creative.) Good Job! Keep up the good work!