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1/26/2019 c1 Lynn
Awe!
1/30/2017 c1 Sue Dooley
Awesome! Tiva forever.
7/28/2016 c1 Sue Dooley
Terrific! Cute! Tiva forever.
3/8/2015 c1 Guest
All of your stories are so wonderful, this one is especially beautiful! Keep up the amazing writing please! xx 3
2/1/2015 c1 Princess Tiva 1989
sooo cute 3
1/6/2012 c1 4SmellyThePirate
Sweet story. I would love to see a snow fight between these two in the show. That would be amazing. :)
1/14/2011 c1 16whoahomo
Hmm, alright... Well, you have a few issues here. The first being that if any paragraph is longer that 5 lines, nobody is going to read it. That's just the way it is. You need to find places to break it up. Also, when a new person is speaking, you need to start a new paragraph. I just kind of skimmed it, because like I said, I honestly had no desire to try and navigate those giant paragraphs, but your spelling and grammar seemed good. So I say go back, fix it, maybe get it beta-ed... then re-post. Trust me, you'll get a much better response.
1/14/2011 c1 apedarling
Love it! So cute! Too short:D

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