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4/20/2012 c5 4Ereb Lor
Oh, if only...
4/20/2012 c3 Ereb Lor
This sounds just how I would act in a situation like this, ha

~Ereb Lor
4/20/2012 c2 Ereb Lor
This is getting more and more interesting as I read on. Love the scripture verses.

~Ereb Lor
8/16/2011 c6 6flyspecks
Defying Gravity...such an amazing song!

Emma sure fit in quickly!
8/16/2011 c5 flyspecks
YES! Kid Blink! I swear, Trey Parker is amazing (as is the real Kid Blink).

And I love the Voice sympathizing with Emma and her vomiting.
8/16/2011 c4 flyspecks
I wish I could find an old letter in a desk drawer. Talk about fascinating.

Gah! What happens next? Who has spoken? How can they read Emma's mind? WHAT WILL SHE DO?

I'll just have to go to the next chapter...
8/16/2011 c3 flyspecks
Ha ha ha! Oh Emma... "It only takes a few minutes to stab someone!"

Her train of thought is amazing, and I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who kind of thinks in that way...

Can't wait for the true Adventure to start!
8/16/2011 c2 flyspecks
Hmm, whatever could all of these pieces of paper mean?

I'll just have to read on and see!
8/16/2011 c1 flyspecks
You have the character of a small child down perfectly! The dialogue is down pat. And I love that you included names of other authors here on FF!

And it's so true: you can NEVER get off again. Dun dun dun.
8/11/2011 c10 Kc
I appreciate how unromantic she is! It's way better than all those sappy syrupy love stories that they always write.
6/8/2011 c10 25LucyOfNarnia
Oh so very interesting this is getting! It's actually a bit comical how Emma falls to the ground and makes Jack thinks Spot did all the damage. Is that wrong to laugh? Haha. But wonderful job dear! Can't wait for your update!
6/4/2011 c9 31foreverkneeld
Oh-kay. Um. This is interesting. It's too...um...suggestive? Try toning it down a bit, love.

But you write Emma very well. ;)

And it'll be interesting to see how Spot fits in to all this...

God be with you,

Eavis
6/4/2011 c9 25LucyOfNarnia
Dear girl, I simply adored this chapter. It was so witty, and I LOVED the humor. Hmm. Assassination, Behead, Collapse, Demise. Hahaha. And the part about going of to find a gang to fight with? Teehee. Ah yes. Spot always has to save our silly heroines. And I like that he seems like a gentleman here. :) Fantastic.
6/3/2011 c8 LucyOfNarnia
Hmm.. Where is she going? Yay! Prize! Haha ;) this chapter was very nice, and I'm terribly sorry you're not getting the reviews you deserve. Love, Beth
6/3/2011 c7 DiAmOnDsrBlUe
I love it so far! This story really got my attention because the way you describe your chacters mind,like how she thinks and the way she thinks. Thats's how I am and that's the way I think. Like,well it's really hard to explain it but I hope you understand what I mean. Like i love adventure even though I'm only 12 but I'm more mature physically and mentally.like I like adventure that involes a little bit of danger (even though I've never had the experience from any real adventure.)...my parents always tell me not to go outside so late at night in the pitch black darkness but it's just that,I have so much faith in GOD that I trust him to protect me from any type of danger no matter where I go and what's happened there. And I believe that he trusts me. back just as much because I've been taking night time walks outside In THE DARK and nothing has ever happened .well anyways srry that I wrote all that but I love and admire your story so please keep updating girl! We're sisters in gods way so love ya!
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