
1/31/2011 c1 TheOrchid
ummm...wow. Sorry, that was too short to be called angst. If you rewrote it with multiple chapters and a more detailed plot, I think it would have been a little better...
ummm...wow. Sorry, that was too short to be called angst. If you rewrote it with multiple chapters and a more detailed plot, I think it would have been a little better...
1/21/2011 c1 pokemon ranger lover
hiya friendly friend and did you mean that i live close to u?
hiya friendly friend and did you mean that i live close to u?
1/17/2011 c1
2Windraider
Dude you should totally had Tsuna go hyper dying will mode and kicked their ass.
Afterwards he looks down at Nikki and starts questioning her.
Like saying how he was wrong about her, and how that she had totally forgotten about him and everyone else in the past for a bunch of new friends.
He lastly looks down at her and tells her to never come back or else, and that he would never forgive her for toying with Gokudera's heart.
There was hardly enough here to be called Angst I'm sorry.

Dude you should totally had Tsuna go hyper dying will mode and kicked their ass.
Afterwards he looks down at Nikki and starts questioning her.
Like saying how he was wrong about her, and how that she had totally forgotten about him and everyone else in the past for a bunch of new friends.
He lastly looks down at her and tells her to never come back or else, and that he would never forgive her for toying with Gokudera's heart.
There was hardly enough here to be called Angst I'm sorry.