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for I'm the daughter of Apollo

1/8/2019 c1 Guest
You need a lot more commas and full stops. The sentences just drag on and on.
6/30/2018 c1 Guest
Update
6/21/2012 c11 8Yuri Muto
please keep going.
6/18/2011 c8 9PrincessofArtemis
uh, u said that colt n allie liked each other
5/21/2011 c1 6AwkwardTurtle007
Why is that all your stories seem to feature Mary-Sues? Have you heard of grammar and punctuation? What about the fact that the gods are NOT ALLOWED TO INTERFERE WITH THEIR KIDS' LIVES? Go read the books.
4/3/2011 c11 DaughterofPoseidon25
UPDATe
4/3/2011 c11 2Poseidon's daughter with wings
i LOVED this chappie! poor poor poor apolla! update SOON! please and i mean soon
3/20/2011 c10 DaughterofPoseidon25
Update.
3/18/2011 c10 Poseidon's daughter with wings
awwwww!poor apolla! great chappie update soon
3/15/2011 c9 Poseidon's daughter with wings
that was an awesome chapter!

keep up the good work

and dont 4get to UPDATE!
3/15/2011 c4 hija del mar
dude you need to fix your grammer but all in all it was good
3/15/2011 c1 10lostandmisplaced
More spaces. The story is really confusing you need a beta reader and work on the grammar. Also really you named her Apolla. Come on any name is better than that.

But you have some good ideas. Its just hard to understand them.
3/15/2011 c8 DaughterofPoseidon25
I love it. UPdate.
3/14/2011 c8 2Poseidon's daughter with wings
i love this story! im so glad Cole and Apolla are back together

please please please make another chapter(s)
3/14/2011 c8 Angelixlight
Awesome
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