
11/29/2023 c1 Moltz
Bella wasn’t honest with Edward, let alone herself.
She created this situation and Edward suffered because of her selfishness.
He is needing validation. She needs to be truer to herself.
Why did she wait for him to make the move when she is the one that abruptly left?
People are flawed,
This is very well written.
Thank you for making me think,
Bella wasn’t honest with Edward, let alone herself.
She created this situation and Edward suffered because of her selfishness.
He is needing validation. She needs to be truer to herself.
Why did she wait for him to make the move when she is the one that abruptly left?
People are flawed,
This is very well written.
Thank you for making me think,
9/1/2023 c1 CynMar Rom
Awwwww. I loved this, it was adorable, if a little bit painful. So much packed into such a little package.
Thanks for sharing!
Awwwww. I loved this, it was adorable, if a little bit painful. So much packed into such a little package.
Thanks for sharing!
3/22/2023 c1 marigold123
I really felt Edward’s feelings of happiness…falling in love and then despair over Bella’s rejection. It all came out in his music. Im glad Bella finally knocked on Edward’s door. Sigh! I ish I could have listened to the music he wrote.
I’m kinda going thru your stores. Thank you for writing.
I really felt Edward’s feelings of happiness…falling in love and then despair over Bella’s rejection. It all came out in his music. Im glad Bella finally knocked on Edward’s door. Sigh! I ish I could have listened to the music he wrote.
I’m kinda going thru your stores. Thank you for writing.
3/10/2015 c1 wardlyman
This one shot was ruined with the fact that she left him for weeks and didn't comeback to him on her own. And the fact she WAS in a fucking relationship while with edward, how tf does she have commitment issues? Is she a cheater? Jacob being a dick doesn't justify her dickiery to edward. This edward gonna get screwed over, he doesn't actually know this bella, she left him for WEEKS and was perfectly fine, only reason she came back to him was because he made a move, not her.
This one shot was ruined with the fact that she left him for weeks and didn't comeback to him on her own. And the fact she WAS in a fucking relationship while with edward, how tf does she have commitment issues? Is she a cheater? Jacob being a dick doesn't justify her dickiery to edward. This edward gonna get screwed over, he doesn't actually know this bella, she left him for WEEKS and was perfectly fine, only reason she came back to him was because he made a move, not her.
1/22/2015 c1 Guest
Some of the best writing in fan fiction. Good work.
Some of the best writing in fan fiction. Good work.