for Love Songs in E Minor1/22/2011 c1 
14Sunsetwing
That one hurt my heart a little there for awhile, but I loved it none the less :)
14SunsetwingThat one hurt my heart a little there for awhile, but I loved it none the less :)
1/22/2011 c1 19FroggyDarren
Great story! You had me all confused and curious and impatient and ... I don't even know what, but I read this without blinking lol
Thank you for sharing ;)
19FroggyDarrenGreat story! You had me all confused and curious and impatient and ... I don't even know what, but I read this without blinking lol
Thank you for sharing ;)
1/21/2011 c1 1AnjieNet
What an amazing one-shot (and photo too!) Really enjoyed this piece, had everything - little bit of flirting, little bit loving, little bit of angst/heartbreak, ending in an HEA.
1AnjieNetWhat an amazing one-shot (and photo too!) Really enjoyed this piece, had everything - little bit of flirting, little bit loving, little bit of angst/heartbreak, ending in an HEA.
1/21/2011 c1 lippylou
Hey sweetie
I really enjoyed this one shot. I liked the immediacy of the tense you used. My heart broke for Edward when Bella was so cruel to him. I'm glad it worked out in the end.
Hugs
Annette
Hey sweetie
I really enjoyed this one shot. I liked the immediacy of the tense you used. My heart broke for Edward when Bella was so cruel to him. I'm glad it worked out in the end.
Hugs
Annette
1/20/2011 c1 deenerneener
Brava!
Amazing picture; wonderful, fitting exposition.
I can so easily envision Edward on the roof, playing Bach on the guitar, while a rapt Bella looks on. (I know from experience how delicious and seductive a man playing classical guitar, perhaps Bach in particular, can be. Sigh.) It's so easy to fall in love with a man playing guitar.
The idea of Edward stuck in a bank for ANY length of time is torture. Of course, part of me says that Bella in law school is just wrong, also (but that's just because I hated law school, myself), but if that's what this Bella wants, well amen to her. (I won't spend a moment extrapolating the possibile long-term incompatibility of a musician and a lawyer. Yes, Edward works in a bank, but that's not going to last.)
I was going to say that it must be a consolation for Edward to have the outlet of composition into which to channel his heartache at Bella's rejection, but even if you can turn grief into art, the pain is still there.
What a perfect time for Edward to offer his music - her music - to Bella. Christmas. Perfect timing for the arc of this story, from (late?) fall into winter.
And how perfect that there are fireworks when she returns.
I love the image of Edward's brain singing.
I love your way with words.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Brava!
Amazing picture; wonderful, fitting exposition.
I can so easily envision Edward on the roof, playing Bach on the guitar, while a rapt Bella looks on. (I know from experience how delicious and seductive a man playing classical guitar, perhaps Bach in particular, can be. Sigh.) It's so easy to fall in love with a man playing guitar.
The idea of Edward stuck in a bank for ANY length of time is torture. Of course, part of me says that Bella in law school is just wrong, also (but that's just because I hated law school, myself), but if that's what this Bella wants, well amen to her. (I won't spend a moment extrapolating the possibile long-term incompatibility of a musician and a lawyer. Yes, Edward works in a bank, but that's not going to last.)
I was going to say that it must be a consolation for Edward to have the outlet of composition into which to channel his heartache at Bella's rejection, but even if you can turn grief into art, the pain is still there.
What a perfect time for Edward to offer his music - her music - to Bella. Christmas. Perfect timing for the arc of this story, from (late?) fall into winter.
And how perfect that there are fireworks when she returns.
I love the image of Edward's brain singing.
I love your way with words.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
1/20/2011 c1 CindyWindy
Very fine writing, as I know I can expect for you every time! I liked the cuddling with the lawn chairs close together, that she broke up with Jake the first night, and how he was always so careful where he touched her. I love how you showed her bringing him to life. Thanks for this!
Very fine writing, as I know I can expect for you every time! I liked the cuddling with the lawn chairs close together, that she broke up with Jake the first night, and how he was always so careful where he touched her. I love how you showed her bringing him to life. Thanks for this!
1/20/2011 c1 bemily
This story really captured the mood and vibe of that picture. That is EXACTLY what I think would be going on by looking at it. If, you know, I had an imagination and could write.
You really got the EPOV.
Some of my favorites:
"at once embarrassed and excited" - she just met him, she gets him and he loves it.
"he took them two at a time." - it has only been 4 days and he can't wait to see her
"his heart thrums thinking that maybe, just maybe, her reaction is because of the 'my' in front of the 'girl'"
and of course "the girl"
This story really captured the mood and vibe of that picture. That is EXACTLY what I think would be going on by looking at it. If, you know, I had an imagination and could write.
You really got the EPOV.
Some of my favorites:
"at once embarrassed and excited" - she just met him, she gets him and he loves it.
"he took them two at a time." - it has only been 4 days and he can't wait to see her
"his heart thrums thinking that maybe, just maybe, her reaction is because of the 'my' in front of the 'girl'"
and of course "the girl"
1/20/2011 c1 futuregirl1709
Amazing oneshot!
I loved reading Edward and Bella going through all those phases: getting to know each other, becoming friends, falling in love and putting yourself out there to be crushed but then healed again, together. Of course they got back together; she is his muse, they're like fate. I really loved how you put it: 'One thing is clear: Edward and Bella match, lock and key.'
I think you wrote the feelings and emotions so well! This: 'His brain is on rewind and it constantly replays her rejection. His brain would make a fantastic medieval torture device.' It broke my heart! I'm really glad she came back to him.
Great job!
Amazing oneshot!
I loved reading Edward and Bella going through all those phases: getting to know each other, becoming friends, falling in love and putting yourself out there to be crushed but then healed again, together. Of course they got back together; she is his muse, they're like fate. I really loved how you put it: 'One thing is clear: Edward and Bella match, lock and key.'
I think you wrote the feelings and emotions so well! This: 'His brain is on rewind and it constantly replays her rejection. His brain would make a fantastic medieval torture device.' It broke my heart! I'm really glad she came back to him.
Great job!
1/20/2011 c1 Johnthe
E is for Edward! Nothing minor about him though, I'm afraid.
Thanks Katinki for a beautiful story. I wish someone would write me some music. Perhaps I'll bid for a fandom gives back auction, then I can at least get a story written for me.
E is for Edward! Nothing minor about him though, I'm afraid.
Thanks Katinki for a beautiful story. I wish someone would write me some music. Perhaps I'll bid for a fandom gives back auction, then I can at least get a story written for me.
1/19/2011 c1 Cingav
I've been reading on this site for 3 years, every single day. I've been sick for 6 years and reading Twilight and then it's fanfiction is my only escape.
This. Is. My. First. Review.
I just had to! Of the thousand sories and one shots I have read I have never enjoyed one so much as what I've just read. I don't know what to say to you, except to beg for a thousand more from YOU. I adore everything you've written, and now this one takes the cake.
Thank you to whatever it is that gives you the ability to write like you do. With all your stories they stay with me for days after I'm done. It's so very enjoyable.
Thank you, please keep going?
I've been reading on this site for 3 years, every single day. I've been sick for 6 years and reading Twilight and then it's fanfiction is my only escape.
This. Is. My. First. Review.
I just had to! Of the thousand sories and one shots I have read I have never enjoyed one so much as what I've just read. I don't know what to say to you, except to beg for a thousand more from YOU. I adore everything you've written, and now this one takes the cake.
Thank you to whatever it is that gives you the ability to write like you do. With all your stories they stay with me for days after I'm done. It's so very enjoyable.
Thank you, please keep going?