for Love Songs in E Minor1/18/2011 c1 Alotalittle
What a perfect little wonderful story. There were so many heartfelt and tender moments. Really enjoyed it - so thanks!
What a perfect little wonderful story. There were so many heartfelt and tender moments. Really enjoyed it - so thanks!
1/18/2011 c1 heygirl18
Loved it! Especially with only one POV - made it more like real life I suppose, and you really felt you were living it all with him.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest :)
~ Claire
Loved it! Especially with only one POV - made it more like real life I suppose, and you really felt you were living it all with him.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest :)
~ Claire
1/18/2011 c1 Karandash86
*squeal* So GOOD! You surprised me with this one! I loved it so much. This story is amazing. The details you add always make everything pop out and seem so real.
I laughed so hard when Bella was trying her cigarette. The coughing and choking. So true. And I loved how she was his inspiration and just UNF. It's just... I can't even tell you how amazing this is.
LOVE IT BB!
Ni
*squeal* So GOOD! You surprised me with this one! I loved it so much. This story is amazing. The details you add always make everything pop out and seem so real.
I laughed so hard when Bella was trying her cigarette. The coughing and choking. So true. And I loved how she was his inspiration and just UNF. It's just... I can't even tell you how amazing this is.
LOVE IT BB!
Ni
1/18/2011 c1 
1322blue
"Tonight, he took them two at a time." This was the part where I leaned forward and smiled.
"That's my girl." This part made me smile wider.
The girlfriend segment - I love how they skated around it, how much he was trying to hold it together. Then when it started to rain, it felt like it took forever for them to kiss, but it was so worth it.
I loved it from beginning to end, even when she couldn't handle it, I thought it was done so very well. Bella was the perfect mix of quirk and sweet. She made me laugh. And Edward, was just sweet and sexy and... gah. Loved him.
This is such a great story for the contest pic, truly. Thank you for the HEA, too! The little tab thingy on the right hand side of my screen was getting dangerously close to the bottom, and, dare I say, I worried we'd have heart fail. lol Really, though, I simply adored this o/s. You've got my vote, and it's not just b/c you're cute.
1322blue"Tonight, he took them two at a time." This was the part where I leaned forward and smiled.
"That's my girl." This part made me smile wider.
The girlfriend segment - I love how they skated around it, how much he was trying to hold it together. Then when it started to rain, it felt like it took forever for them to kiss, but it was so worth it.
I loved it from beginning to end, even when she couldn't handle it, I thought it was done so very well. Bella was the perfect mix of quirk and sweet. She made me laugh. And Edward, was just sweet and sexy and... gah. Loved him.
This is such a great story for the contest pic, truly. Thank you for the HEA, too! The little tab thingy on the right hand side of my screen was getting dangerously close to the bottom, and, dare I say, I worried we'd have heart fail. lol Really, though, I simply adored this o/s. You've got my vote, and it's not just b/c you're cute.
1/18/2011 c1 cullengirl1983
Fun for you? You mean fun for me! I loved it! I have no idea how you do it, but this felt... complete. I loved the passage of time. I loved Edward's reactions and his voice was funny and snarky and so sweet. Just God. Amazing! You have my vote!
Fun for you? You mean fun for me! I loved it! I have no idea how you do it, but this felt... complete. I loved the passage of time. I loved Edward's reactions and his voice was funny and snarky and so sweet. Just God. Amazing! You have my vote!
1/18/2011 c1 1jansails
I imagined Edward up on his rooftop, solitary, letting his aloneness define his days, his nights.
Not knowing how to move past his perch, both literal & figurative, Edward stays, stuck in his mind numbing job & uninspired music.
Bella breaks Edward's monotony, bringing anticipation, excitement, interest, curiosity, & notes begin surging through him.
Then, Bella gives him the moon & the stars in one day, only to breaks Edward's heart, sending it into a black hole of loss & despair.
Edward does the only thing he can, sending Bella his heart in his music, hoping to bring her back to him.
Thankfully, his gift works, reminding Bella of everything Edward is & has been to her.
Really wonderful work, beautifully written.
jansails/jan2
1jansailsI imagined Edward up on his rooftop, solitary, letting his aloneness define his days, his nights.
Not knowing how to move past his perch, both literal & figurative, Edward stays, stuck in his mind numbing job & uninspired music.
Bella breaks Edward's monotony, bringing anticipation, excitement, interest, curiosity, & notes begin surging through him.
Then, Bella gives him the moon & the stars in one day, only to breaks Edward's heart, sending it into a black hole of loss & despair.
Edward does the only thing he can, sending Bella his heart in his music, hoping to bring her back to him.
Thankfully, his gift works, reminding Bella of everything Edward is & has been to her.
Really wonderful work, beautifully written.
jansails/jan2