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for June's dilema, Neal's big problem!

2/2/2011 c6 8govgal
Intriguing. Very smart of neal to ask Mallory for help stealing the gun.
2/2/2011 c6 4SyFyDiva
Wow, what a great story. I can't believe this is the first I'm seeing it. Can't wait to read more!
1/31/2011 c5 15lizard1969
oh yeah...great chapter

can't wait to see what happens next
1/30/2011 c5 26Stroma
Very good chapter.
1/29/2011 c5 2costley51
The paragraphs at the beginning are a bit too long\chunky to read comfortably, but when you got into the dialogue, I began to rather enjoy it.

I like seeing a story where the FBI is on a suspect Neal want to protect (other than Moz or Alex). It would obviously happen from time to time if he has any loyalty. And part with June and the gun keeps for a more complicated and therefore more intersesting storyline than many fanfics I've seen.
1/28/2011 c5 8govgal
Awesome chapter!
1/25/2011 c4 16morgo7kc
great chapter! im suspicious of the Dhumo guy...
1/25/2011 c4 8govgal
LOL. Loved that Neal took the wallet and made Peter give it back!
1/25/2011 c4 26Stroma
Great chapter.
1/22/2011 c3 Stroma
Very good chapter.
1/22/2011 c3 Casey
Interesting! I love it!
1/22/2011 c3 8govgal
Very nice!
1/19/2011 c1 16morgo7kc
interesting start
1/19/2011 c1 8govgal
Interesting scenario! Can't wait for more!
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