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2/24/2011 c1 2not someone of importance
Lunaraisa! *waves* I like this. It was nice.

kthxbai

-Dia
2/19/2011 c1 4lifeisabook
I like it! It's original. I never really thought about Rachel as someone who would care whether or not she had friends. But I guess everyone needs friends.
2/6/2011 c1 iBoss
Wow, my favorite part was when it said "You can't just paint away, your sorrow". It's always nice seeing the other side of the characters. I like it.
2/2/2011 c1 10The Midnight Doe
Oh, me likes :3

There was only the one spot where you missed an apostophe, but that's it. I would also right out 'Rachel Elizabeth Dare' because I think it sounds better.

Other than that, it's flawless :D

Tay &hearts
1/20/2011 c1 compartmental
Luna, this was cool. :3

But, er, what was the sentence?

I only witnessed one part where you didn't use an apostrophe, and I'd suggest actually writing out "Elizabeth," especially in a piece this short.

ANYWAY I liked it.

Thanks, much.

Rachel
1/20/2011 c1 10Vanished Snowflake
So I saw your call for a review in Ghost Town...Hmm. Dark part of Rachel's life...never really gave it much thought. Thanks for inspiring me(off to write another angst fic)! Please review my stories too! Thanks:)
1/20/2011 c1 Lieutenant Of Artemis
*saw Luna's post on V!Ville and read this*

Only criticism:

You spelled can't 'cant'. But that's me being picky.

Oh, and something else.

I like this :)

~ Lexis
1/19/2011 c1 14zynaofthenight
Nice drabble. It sums up everything quite concisely :D

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