2/19/2011 c1 4lifeisabook
I like it! It's original. I never really thought about Rachel as someone who would care whether or not she had friends. But I guess everyone needs friends.
I like it! It's original. I never really thought about Rachel as someone who would care whether or not she had friends. But I guess everyone needs friends.
2/6/2011 c1 iBoss
Wow, my favorite part was when it said "You can't just paint away, your sorrow". It's always nice seeing the other side of the characters. I like it.
Wow, my favorite part was when it said "You can't just paint away, your sorrow". It's always nice seeing the other side of the characters. I like it.
2/2/2011 c1 10The Midnight Doe
Oh, me likes :3
There was only the one spot where you missed an apostophe, but that's it. I would also right out 'Rachel Elizabeth Dare' because I think it sounds better.
Other than that, it's flawless :D
Tay &hearts
Oh, me likes :3
There was only the one spot where you missed an apostophe, but that's it. I would also right out 'Rachel Elizabeth Dare' because I think it sounds better.
Other than that, it's flawless :D
Tay &hearts
1/20/2011 c1 compartmental
Luna, this was cool. :3
But, er, what was the sentence?
I only witnessed one part where you didn't use an apostrophe, and I'd suggest actually writing out "Elizabeth," especially in a piece this short.
ANYWAY I liked it.
Thanks, much.
Rachel
Luna, this was cool. :3
But, er, what was the sentence?
I only witnessed one part where you didn't use an apostrophe, and I'd suggest actually writing out "Elizabeth," especially in a piece this short.
ANYWAY I liked it.
Thanks, much.
Rachel
1/20/2011 c1 10Vanished Snowflake
So I saw your call for a review in Ghost Town...Hmm. Dark part of Rachel's life...never really gave it much thought. Thanks for inspiring me(off to write another angst fic)! Please review my stories too! Thanks:)
So I saw your call for a review in Ghost Town...Hmm. Dark part of Rachel's life...never really gave it much thought. Thanks for inspiring me(off to write another angst fic)! Please review my stories too! Thanks:)
1/20/2011 c1 Lieutenant Of Artemis
*saw Luna's post on V!Ville and read this*
Only criticism:
You spelled can't 'cant'. But that's me being picky.
Oh, and something else.
I like this :)
~ Lexis
*saw Luna's post on V!Ville and read this*
Only criticism:
You spelled can't 'cant'. But that's me being picky.
Oh, and something else.
I like this :)
~ Lexis