
9/6/2015 c1 Lolal
There is lots of grammer errors! Just saying!
There is lots of grammer errors! Just saying!
3/31/2015 c1 Guest
Fairy tail Dragon Slayer is a Naruto Fanboy. He delete reviews that easily Counter his arguments because he is just that petty. Which any coward would. Exactly how would he know How big the naruto planet is? Think about.
He beilive naruto is planet buster despite it not being true.
His calculations do not even apply to physic of the narutoverse or Dbzverse.
Tonrei split the moon... big deal..master Roshi utterly Destroyed the moon.
I saw your review and you are a reasonable guy. I'am glad you are not fooled by fanboy.
He to measure the sword Tonrei wielded...But is made up of Chakra. Pure energy can not be weight.
I gurantee that if post yourself as a Guest that Crazed Author will simply delete your review counters his arguement.
Many guests are insulting him because He Started the mess Insulting them and Calling them DBZFanboys because they were correcting him and now he suddendly becomed delusional after the new movie came out and Used the feats in movie but exaggerated those said Feats and then claim naruto is a Planet buster and started wanking and nerfing every dbz character. ... thinking genjutsu can affect Ki users that are ususually mentally strong. As it stated that ki have Threr compentents.. Energy, Courage, and Mind... those are the Three compenents of ki.
Sorry for the Random rant.. your story is impressive.
Fairy tail Dragon Slayer is a Naruto Fanboy. He delete reviews that easily Counter his arguments because he is just that petty. Which any coward would. Exactly how would he know How big the naruto planet is? Think about.
He beilive naruto is planet buster despite it not being true.
His calculations do not even apply to physic of the narutoverse or Dbzverse.
Tonrei split the moon... big deal..master Roshi utterly Destroyed the moon.
I saw your review and you are a reasonable guy. I'am glad you are not fooled by fanboy.
He to measure the sword Tonrei wielded...But is made up of Chakra. Pure energy can not be weight.
I gurantee that if post yourself as a Guest that Crazed Author will simply delete your review counters his arguement.
Many guests are insulting him because He Started the mess Insulting them and Calling them DBZFanboys because they were correcting him and now he suddendly becomed delusional after the new movie came out and Used the feats in movie but exaggerated those said Feats and then claim naruto is a Planet buster and started wanking and nerfing every dbz character. ... thinking genjutsu can affect Ki users that are ususually mentally strong. As it stated that ki have Threr compentents.. Energy, Courage, and Mind... those are the Three compenents of ki.
Sorry for the Random rant.. your story is impressive.
10/28/2012 c1
3David Fishwick
I hope that you will write more soon as I enjoyed reading this chapter.

I hope that you will write more soon as I enjoyed reading this chapter.
1/24/2011 c1
9Frost Merry Darkness Luver
His name is Heinrick Nest Fredrick just doesn't sound right but so far so good

His name is Heinrick Nest Fredrick just doesn't sound right but so far so good