for Even When1/3/2018 c1 Cathie Johnson
the ending resolves the story without being too cutesy. Because yu mentioned it and did not dwell on the emotions.
the ending resolves the story without being too cutesy. Because yu mentioned it and did not dwell on the emotions.
10/12/2011 c1 
102The North Wyn
Very sweet. I love the comparison drawn between Eliot and Sam...and Nate's other kids, of course. ;) I love the whole Eliot passage, especially the last two paragraphs. Thanks for sharing!
102The North WynVery sweet. I love the comparison drawn between Eliot and Sam...and Nate's other kids, of course. ;) I love the whole Eliot passage, especially the last two paragraphs. Thanks for sharing!
8/15/2011 c1 shock rock lover
so sweet. though i can only imagine that eliot's thinking 'what the hell'? i loved the connection you made to the thoughts.
so sweet. though i can only imagine that eliot's thinking 'what the hell'? i loved the connection you made to the thoughts.
1/21/2011 c1 169cedricsowner
I really like the second part. It's very touching how you manage to draw a connection between Nate's past and present and a very believable interpretation of what fuels his feelings for his team in the circumstance of injury. Compared to the second part, the first part, in my opinion, pales a little - I think it could have been shorter; you're giving two examples for why Nate feels the way he does while one (the one with the swimming pool) might have been more intense. But this is really just a small point - the idea of Nate taking care of Eliot and memories of Sam interweaving at the same time is beautiful. Good job!
169cedricsownerI really like the second part. It's very touching how you manage to draw a connection between Nate's past and present and a very believable interpretation of what fuels his feelings for his team in the circumstance of injury. Compared to the second part, the first part, in my opinion, pales a little - I think it could have been shorter; you're giving two examples for why Nate feels the way he does while one (the one with the swimming pool) might have been more intense. But this is really just a small point - the idea of Nate taking care of Eliot and memories of Sam interweaving at the same time is beautiful. Good job!