
7/7/2011 c1
33Tashana Ambrosia
Wow. This is amazing. I love the whole moment with him calling to Shelby thinking she's Rachel. The 1st conversation with Beth is awesome.
But that last scene painfully well done. It just rips your heart right out of your chest. - So bittersweet. Just wonderful.
The last line: And badasses don't cry.
Is perfection. Great job on this. Thanks for sharing.
*Smiles*
-T.A.

Wow. This is amazing. I love the whole moment with him calling to Shelby thinking she's Rachel. The 1st conversation with Beth is awesome.
But that last scene painfully well done. It just rips your heart right out of your chest. - So bittersweet. Just wonderful.
The last line: And badasses don't cry.
Is perfection. Great job on this. Thanks for sharing.
*Smiles*
-T.A.
3/30/2011 c1
9bookluvr4life
I am clearly not a badass since this story made me cry. it' fantastic and real and I love it SO much!

I am clearly not a badass since this story made me cry. it' fantastic and real and I love it SO much!
2/23/2011 c1 I-Need-A-Time-Machine
I usually doubt the people who say that they cry when they read a story because I personally read too many and that NEVER happened to me. But I finally understood what people mean when they say that they cry after reading such a story, because it just happened to me (gosh this sounds so cliche`)and its a weird feeling. You captured how Puck would react perfectly with his being so emotional yet have his badass persona. If only Ryan Murphy would create an episode on how Puck and Quinn would react since Beth, because since the season began its seems as if they forgot everything that happened last year. So I credit you for writing such a great story and finally helping me understand what a person means when they say "I just cried"... Thank you
-Kendall
I usually doubt the people who say that they cry when they read a story because I personally read too many and that NEVER happened to me. But I finally understood what people mean when they say that they cry after reading such a story, because it just happened to me (gosh this sounds so cliche`)and its a weird feeling. You captured how Puck would react perfectly with his being so emotional yet have his badass persona. If only Ryan Murphy would create an episode on how Puck and Quinn would react since Beth, because since the season began its seems as if they forgot everything that happened last year. So I credit you for writing such a great story and finally helping me understand what a person means when they say "I just cried"... Thank you
-Kendall
2/14/2011 c1 funkybuttkiss
This was so well written. It was very sad. I cried. I loved the plot. It seemed that it could actually happen in the show.
This was so well written. It was very sad. I cried. I loved the plot. It seemed that it could actually happen in the show.
1/28/2011 c1
58SabbyStarlight
Wow, amazing story. It was perfect. Realistic, beautiful, heartbreaking, and totally adorable all at once. And then that one line at the end that had me laughing through my tears... brilliant!

Wow, amazing story. It was perfect. Realistic, beautiful, heartbreaking, and totally adorable all at once. And then that one line at the end that had me laughing through my tears... brilliant!
1/23/2011 c1
1alltimealexandria
Aww. ): Little Beth is so adorable, and I loved how Puck got to see her again, but it broke my heart that she left again. :/ I'm not the type to demand sequels, because I love sad stories that are left on their own (in real life, happy endings aren't exactly a dime a dozen), but it would definitely make my life if you wrote another story about Beth finding out who her actual parents are. Even if there are a thousand of those, the way you've written this leaves me wanting more.

Aww. ): Little Beth is so adorable, and I loved how Puck got to see her again, but it broke my heart that she left again. :/ I'm not the type to demand sequels, because I love sad stories that are left on their own (in real life, happy endings aren't exactly a dime a dozen), but it would definitely make my life if you wrote another story about Beth finding out who her actual parents are. Even if there are a thousand of those, the way you've written this leaves me wanting more.
1/23/2011 c1 A fan
Awwwww that was soooo cute.. I thought I was going to cry... Poor Puck, but I loved it otherwise :)
Maybe you coyuld do another one similar but Quinn ruinning into Beth randomly
Awwwww that was soooo cute.. I thought I was going to cry... Poor Puck, but I loved it otherwise :)
Maybe you coyuld do another one similar but Quinn ruinning into Beth randomly
1/23/2011 c1 ber1719
Oh my goodness, that was the sweetest, most heart-breaking thing I've read in a long time. I loved that Puck and Rachel and even Shelby are so in character. And Beth...well she was as precious as I thought she would be all grown up.
I can't wait to read some more stories from you! This was fantastic.
Oh my goodness, that was the sweetest, most heart-breaking thing I've read in a long time. I loved that Puck and Rachel and even Shelby are so in character. And Beth...well she was as precious as I thought she would be all grown up.
I can't wait to read some more stories from you! This was fantastic.