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1/24/2011 c3 schmanski
I would like to see the third story done first followed by the first. Im not much of a fan of the second story.
1/24/2011 c3 kewr69
This on is good too...it's nearly a draw between this and the first on the best but I believe the first one was a bit better overall
1/24/2011 c3 1Quincy80
Well I have to say that my preference is 3, 1 and then 2.

3 wins because it strikes me as being about a 40-50 thousand word fic which would then free up time for 1. I'd like to see 2 some time(I want to see some of those secrets revealed), but given that you feel that you are short on ideas after the first chapter... well lets just call that a warning sign.

Also, if you write 3 you get bonus points for making a comment along the lines of "Hey Tom, I got curious and looked you up in the family tree. I was a little confused at your branch, wondering why there was diagram of a ladder, but things cleared up a little when I realized it was so twisted it could only be a double helix."
1/24/2011 c2 kewr69
This was good but the first one was better maybe keep it and do it at a later time, though the whole 'boot to the head' thing is a bit much.
1/23/2011 c3 dragonsheart8261920
Do I have to pick just one? I like all three
1/23/2011 c1 kewr69
This one is great so far and I hope you carry it on, now I will read the others and let you know what I think but this one would make a great story and I for one would love to see it completed.
1/23/2011 c3 ResponsivePanic
I liked all three of them, and can't wait to read them as they come out.
1/23/2011 c1 Coyote2012
This is a fantastically good start to a seldom used branch of the time travel plot. I really enjoyed it and hope that you deem it worthy of continuing.
1/23/2011 c2 silversnitch4765
first story is better so far...
1/23/2011 c3 karthik9
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
1/23/2011 c1 Bashalinge
this is a good one
1/23/2011 c3 oldmetalhead
I'll tel you what. This is the most challenging decision ever.

All three of these are excellent. I want to see all of them, SOON!

But, I'll have to go with the first as the best one to start with.

Looking forward to reading more of your writing.

1/23/2011 c3 alaskan-dracolych
Is there a chance of you continuing on all of them, even if it is eventually?
1/23/2011 c3 1Lord Sia
Enchanted Object vs Master Enchanter, round two;


Great selection, I honestly couldn't care less which one of these you choose to pursue first. Keep up the good work!
1/23/2011 c2 bookivore
I agree this one ran out of steam. I think my first question is what is this Harry going to be surprised by? There is no sign yet of a challenge that would match him. Implicit in the time travel Harry is a smart, dangerous Voldemort, but the flaw in the Manipulative Dumbledore, Love Potion Weaselys scenario is that once you show the enemy, there's not much left to do. I figure you have to add another twist.
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