for Landstradd's First Chapters9/2/2013 c1 DireDropBear
This could end up becoming a fun game of "Who can come up with the best title for Harry?"
This could end up becoming a fun game of "Who can come up with the best title for Harry?"
2/28/2013 c3 keichan2
I liked all three ideas!
They all had never seen before (at least, not by me ;-p) ideas.
I really have no preference about which one you should concentrate on first (and as I'm a bit late, you already have chosen, though haven't updated for some time) and I would really like to read more of the three of them.
I liked all three ideas!
They all had never seen before (at least, not by me ;-p) ideas.
I really have no preference about which one you should concentrate on first (and as I'm a bit late, you already have chosen, though haven't updated for some time) and I would really like to read more of the three of them.
1/11/2013 c1 johnapple
You write an excellent story - you tell a good story; but I don't think English is your first language. "An" is an object of "one : e.g. I stepped on an ant. It is not the same as : "and" often used in the completion of a long sentence. I am also not that great on English grammar, but your writing is good enough that I can look over and clarify the grammatical mistakes in my mind as I read.
I hope you continue to write your stories as I am sure I will continue to read you for your time and effort.
You write an excellent story - you tell a good story; but I don't think English is your first language. "An" is an object of "one : e.g. I stepped on an ant. It is not the same as : "and" often used in the completion of a long sentence. I am also not that great on English grammar, but your writing is good enough that I can look over and clarify the grammatical mistakes in my mind as I read.
I hope you continue to write your stories as I am sure I will continue to read you for your time and effort.
12/15/2012 c2 Guest
Maintaning the status quo is a awesome story. I would love it if you continued that one.
Maintaning the status quo is a awesome story. I would love it if you continued that one.
11/26/2012 c1 Silverdragonstar
Please pursue this first plot bunny! It kicks butt. Almost made me late for work this morning as I tend to read FF at breakfast. ( Great way to wake up.) I was that into it.
Please pursue this first plot bunny! It kicks butt. Almost made me late for work this morning as I tend to read FF at breakfast. ( Great way to wake up.) I was that into it.
11/17/2012 c3 
1Toby860
oh man. this is by far your best start and i hope that you will take the time to make this story full legenth. do you have any plans to continue and make this perticular story a feature. i have some questions involving it. do you plan to touch upon the tomb raider movies. i as cause i can see harry's knowledge helpong out laura on the quests. please consider this. also what is your plan for the triwizard tournament. anyways good luck if you try for this story.
1Toby860oh man. this is by far your best start and i hope that you will take the time to make this story full legenth. do you have any plans to continue and make this perticular story a feature. i have some questions involving it. do you plan to touch upon the tomb raider movies. i as cause i can see harry's knowledge helpong out laura on the quests. please consider this. also what is your plan for the triwizard tournament. anyways good luck if you try for this story.
11/17/2012 c2 Toby860
i must say that this is a good start. personally i think that you should try and continue this story.
i must say that this is a good start. personally i think that you should try and continue this story.
11/5/2012 c3 1mageofmyth
I would love to see any of these turned into stories, especially the first two.
1mageofmythI would love to see any of these turned into stories, especially the first two.