3/29/2024 c1 Sandra46
ive really enjoyed this story, i think I've read it before many years ago. i do hope you finally have a chance to update and finish it with a very happy ending. even if it takes years, im following this story. thanks for the great read. i literally couldn't put it down thanks
ive really enjoyed this story, i think I've read it before many years ago. i do hope you finally have a chance to update and finish it with a very happy ending. even if it takes years, im following this story. thanks for the great read. i literally couldn't put it down thanks
8/19/2023 c8 Emjay2007
I like this as hard as ot is to read. I went through 5 years of domestic violence. During which I was emotionally, physically and sexually abused in evry way concievevable. I was suffocated,strangled ndrowned,sodomised,raped,sexually assaulted in every manner possible and then stabbed before I managed to escape. However my husband whom I met after was the one who pieced me back together, was and is still the one who from day one put up with all the push back and hurt I threw at him because it hurt to literally be alive and wake up every day to breathe and acknowledge what had happened. So much of it was blank, although I knew what had happened I itially so much of it was to scary, degrading and painful to acknowledge. Ithurt to breathe never mind stay alive, yet he stayed through all of it and is still here 19 years later. There is still times things hot me and are so damn painful I wish for the world to burn and I know he'd happily tear the man who did that to me limb from limb, but my husband and our 3 sons are what keep me fighting and stopping things beating me or overpowering me. No one ever writes about what a it does to those who see you, who are there after the fact when you start remembering and when it's like you're fractured beyond recognition from who you I said as painful as it is to read because I can recognise /acknowledge parts that remind me of an expression or way my husband would say something that tried to hide his pain for what I'd been through. Something it's so hard to see at the time. When iro n ically one of the things you want to do most is protect those around you from the pain you're in and knowing everything,something that makes it all the harder for them because they feel shut out. Thankyou for writing this x
I like this as hard as ot is to read. I went through 5 years of domestic violence. During which I was emotionally, physically and sexually abused in evry way concievevable. I was suffocated,strangled ndrowned,sodomised,raped,sexually assaulted in every manner possible and then stabbed before I managed to escape. However my husband whom I met after was the one who pieced me back together, was and is still the one who from day one put up with all the push back and hurt I threw at him because it hurt to literally be alive and wake up every day to breathe and acknowledge what had happened. So much of it was blank, although I knew what had happened I itially so much of it was to scary, degrading and painful to acknowledge. Ithurt to breathe never mind stay alive, yet he stayed through all of it and is still here 19 years later. There is still times things hot me and are so damn painful I wish for the world to burn and I know he'd happily tear the man who did that to me limb from limb, but my husband and our 3 sons are what keep me fighting and stopping things beating me or overpowering me. No one ever writes about what a it does to those who see you, who are there after the fact when you start remembering and when it's like you're fractured beyond recognition from who you I said as painful as it is to read because I can recognise /acknowledge parts that remind me of an expression or way my husband would say something that tried to hide his pain for what I'd been through. Something it's so hard to see at the time. When iro n ically one of the things you want to do most is protect those around you from the pain you're in and knowing everything,something that makes it all the harder for them because they feel shut out. Thankyou for writing this x
3/7/2022 c7 39Lovely Black Butterfly
In reading the reviews and even in my own stories reviews, why do they think if a woman has been raped they no longer desire sex. Especially in your story where she doesn't even remember it.
I know every woman is different. but rape doesn't necessarily mean you are robbed of your libido
In reading the reviews and even in my own stories reviews, why do they think if a woman has been raped they no longer desire sex. Especially in your story where she doesn't even remember it.
I know every woman is different. but rape doesn't necessarily mean you are robbed of your libido
5/14/2021 c20 Emo4
are you ever going to finish this? I think where you left off with what Bella said to Peter can be a starting point. he said what he needed to she needs time to think about it and realize he is right and so was jasper. PLEASE finish. pretty please.
are you ever going to finish this? I think where you left off with what Bella said to Peter can be a starting point. he said what he needed to she needs time to think about it and realize he is right and so was jasper. PLEASE finish. pretty please.
2/16/2021 c1 Ravenmoon42613
I'm sorry but bella is being ridiculous. she willingly had sex with Peter n now claiming rape not ok. jasper shouldn't even stand a chance he is not her mate n its fucked to make it like they'll be together. shes getting to the point of annoying.
I'm sorry but bella is being ridiculous. she willingly had sex with Peter n now claiming rape not ok. jasper shouldn't even stand a chance he is not her mate n its fucked to make it like they'll be together. shes getting to the point of annoying.
2/5/2021 c20 TiffaniW
It feels like this cycle has gone on long enough. She is a vampire now and has access to 100% of her brain and yet her thinking has yet to mature. It should have changed leaps and bounds by changing. I think you’ve written yourself into a circle and now it just replays every chapter. There is no growth. Just the same struggle set against different backdrops. It’s tiring to read chapter upon chapter. She clearly loves two men. Maybe it takes both of them to make her whole whatever that looks like. But all three deserve some happiness and some revenge on the Cullens. Just my 2 cents.
It feels like this cycle has gone on long enough. She is a vampire now and has access to 100% of her brain and yet her thinking has yet to mature. It should have changed leaps and bounds by changing. I think you’ve written yourself into a circle and now it just replays every chapter. There is no growth. Just the same struggle set against different backdrops. It’s tiring to read chapter upon chapter. She clearly loves two men. Maybe it takes both of them to make her whole whatever that looks like. But all three deserve some happiness and some revenge on the Cullens. Just my 2 cents.
11/10/2020 c20 hatepickinnames
it's been more than a year since this chapter, will the story ever get finished?
it's been more than a year since this chapter, will the story ever get finished?
12/11/2019 c20 Blistful2006
Wow jeez just sucks all the way around probably should have got her some counseling and he definitely should have waited as clearly something is wrong with her she never healed or dealt with anything properly
Wow jeez just sucks all the way around probably should have got her some counseling and he definitely should have waited as clearly something is wrong with her she never healed or dealt with anything properly