for When Time Stops8/4/2023 c18 Laggard
Saw this on Webtoon a few weeks ago before I came here XD What a coincidence!
Also, just a suggestion: maybe change your summary to reflect this? In case some people don't check chapter titles?
Have fun tooning!
Saw this on Webtoon a few weeks ago before I came here XD What a coincidence!
Also, just a suggestion: maybe change your summary to reflect this? In case some people don't check chapter titles?
Have fun tooning!
4/19/2022 c1 realfan16
hmmm. kid? Dead father talkin in the kid's dream? Teaching kid No mercy? Hell nah, i smell trickery and manipulation. His teenage dreams would probably be the leaf is the enemy or something like that. oh well *shrug* let's see how it goes.
hmmm. kid? Dead father talkin in the kid's dream? Teaching kid No mercy? Hell nah, i smell trickery and manipulation. His teenage dreams would probably be the leaf is the enemy or something like that. oh well *shrug* let's see how it goes.
1/24/2022 c17 Guest
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12/11/2021 c1 bonolomokgalapa
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarrisa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. . . . . . . . .
My apologies
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarrisa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. . . . . . . . .
My apologies
8/5/2020 c17 
2onewitchcat
OMG I love this story so much. It’s so amazing and I love the role reversal of naruto taking care or Kakashi. I hope he’ll tell kakashi about the reason behind his episodes soon and I hope kakashi tells naruto he feels second rate to his Hokage job. I love their relationship so much! Even if you never update this story again, I’m happy this much exists.
2onewitchcatOMG I love this story so much. It’s so amazing and I love the role reversal of naruto taking care or Kakashi. I hope he’ll tell kakashi about the reason behind his episodes soon and I hope kakashi tells naruto he feels second rate to his Hokage job. I love their relationship so much! Even if you never update this story again, I’m happy this much exists.
10/31/2019 c17 1AsiYepYep
Oh, esta historia es increíble. Está bien construida y tiene desarrollo de personajes ¿Algo más? ¿Qué faltaría? Si, actualización.
Al principio creí que sería el típico formato en el cual un personaje regresiona en edad por un jutsu, pero termina recuperando sus recuerdo y edad correspondientes en un lapso no muy largo. Sin embargo, en esta historia, sucede una premisa muy interesante y cautivadora ¡Es irreversible! O al menos eso da a entender hasta ahora.
Me encanta que Naruto se haga cargo de sus sensei y que aplique muchas de sus enseñanzas en él. Además se siente el dolor y preocupación del resto por este asunto fortuito y agravante. Así mismo, los antagonistas también tienen una historia, no son vacíos y se conoce su entorno y motivaciones, pero aún falta comprender más.
La interacción con otros niños de su edad o similares es muy estresante para Kakashi, y concuerda completamente con su personaje. Me gusta el manejo.
Por último, los episodios de confusión de realidades y/o recuerdos es un tema serio, puede poner en peligro a quien esté presente en el momento y al mismo Kakashi.
1AsiYepYepOh, esta historia es increíble. Está bien construida y tiene desarrollo de personajes ¿Algo más? ¿Qué faltaría? Si, actualización.
Al principio creí que sería el típico formato en el cual un personaje regresiona en edad por un jutsu, pero termina recuperando sus recuerdo y edad correspondientes en un lapso no muy largo. Sin embargo, en esta historia, sucede una premisa muy interesante y cautivadora ¡Es irreversible! O al menos eso da a entender hasta ahora.
Me encanta que Naruto se haga cargo de sus sensei y que aplique muchas de sus enseñanzas en él. Además se siente el dolor y preocupación del resto por este asunto fortuito y agravante. Así mismo, los antagonistas también tienen una historia, no son vacíos y se conoce su entorno y motivaciones, pero aún falta comprender más.
La interacción con otros niños de su edad o similares es muy estresante para Kakashi, y concuerda completamente con su personaje. Me gusta el manejo.
Por último, los episodios de confusión de realidades y/o recuerdos es un tema serio, puede poner en peligro a quien esté presente en el momento y al mismo Kakashi.
4/3/2019 c16 32Jet Set Radio Yoyo
Lord, I love this story. It's such an interesting idea and it is a lot of fun to read.
I love how easily Naruto slipped into the role of big brother. He took to it like a water takes to fish, and it is easy to see that he cares a lot for Kakashi. Things aren't perfect obviously and Kakashi still needs to learn to voice his worries to his brother, but it is a learning process. I just like that they care so much about each other.
As for Kakashi I feel so bad for him. It's interesting how he can easily slip into his old memories/life without even realizing it and roll with that for a while only to snap back to the present. It makes for some interesting problems to deal with.
I also like that this has an 'everything old is new again' sort of feel to it. There are differences, but everything sort of blinds together. There are echos of Kakashi's past with Rin, Minato, and Obito here with his current team. There are also echos of Naruto's time as a student here.
There are differences too without a doubt, but somehow that makes the similarities just stand out more. On a separate note thanks to how much Kakashi tends to combine Minato and Naruto into one person in his mixed up mind I now envision that Naruto has grown his hair out so that it is like Minato's hair.
Anyway, I hope you will update this again someday or alternatively post that fixed up new version that you were talking about. This story is a gift.
32Jet Set Radio YoyoLord, I love this story. It's such an interesting idea and it is a lot of fun to read.
I love how easily Naruto slipped into the role of big brother. He took to it like a water takes to fish, and it is easy to see that he cares a lot for Kakashi. Things aren't perfect obviously and Kakashi still needs to learn to voice his worries to his brother, but it is a learning process. I just like that they care so much about each other.
As for Kakashi I feel so bad for him. It's interesting how he can easily slip into his old memories/life without even realizing it and roll with that for a while only to snap back to the present. It makes for some interesting problems to deal with.
I also like that this has an 'everything old is new again' sort of feel to it. There are differences, but everything sort of blinds together. There are echos of Kakashi's past with Rin, Minato, and Obito here with his current team. There are also echos of Naruto's time as a student here.
There are differences too without a doubt, but somehow that makes the similarities just stand out more. On a separate note thanks to how much Kakashi tends to combine Minato and Naruto into one person in his mixed up mind I now envision that Naruto has grown his hair out so that it is like Minato's hair.
Anyway, I hope you will update this again someday or alternatively post that fixed up new version that you were talking about. This story is a gift.
7/4/2018 c17 Guest
Finish the story.
Finish the story.
10/21/2017 c2 Guest
Wtf Sakumo is not a bastard.
The only reason Kakashi was such a stickler for shinobi protocol was since he saw what happened to Sakumo when he didn't follow them
Wtf Sakumo is not a bastard.
The only reason Kakashi was such a stickler for shinobi protocol was since he saw what happened to Sakumo when he didn't follow them
10/21/2017 c1 Guest
Sakumo Hatake would never say "Show no mercy"
He's the complete opposite of that cause if you remember, Sakumo abandoned his mission to save his comrades. This is the whole reason he was ostracized and committed suicide
Sakumo Hatake would never say "Show no mercy"
He's the complete opposite of that cause if you remember, Sakumo abandoned his mission to save his comrades. This is the whole reason he was ostracized and committed suicide