for Royal Rebellions5/12 c35 nicholexking
It’s the year 2025 and I’m re reading all my favourited stories to re-discover hidden gems (I saved this one when I was 13 and I’m now 26 so it’s been a while). I have absolutely loved every part of this story, there’s a select few fics that I re read all the time and I’m so surprised this hasn’t been one of them, it definitely is now. I have no idea if the author will see this but you should be so proud of it, it’s the perfect mix of a little bit of drama and romance. I absolutely love how you’ve incorporated Bella’s stubborn side and Edward’s strong headedness into it, you have fully captured how the characters are in the original books and just transported them into this world. To anyone wondering if you should read it, you absolutely should, you won’t be disappointed.
It’s the year 2025 and I’m re reading all my favourited stories to re-discover hidden gems (I saved this one when I was 13 and I’m now 26 so it’s been a while). I have absolutely loved every part of this story, there’s a select few fics that I re read all the time and I’m so surprised this hasn’t been one of them, it definitely is now. I have no idea if the author will see this but you should be so proud of it, it’s the perfect mix of a little bit of drama and romance. I absolutely love how you’ve incorporated Bella’s stubborn side and Edward’s strong headedness into it, you have fully captured how the characters are in the original books and just transported them into this world. To anyone wondering if you should read it, you absolutely should, you won’t be disappointed.
4/2 c6 Guest
Not really liking this Bella. Her attitude and behaviors are very immature. I understand she is 18, but sheesh. Dial it back a bit.
Not really liking this Bella. Her attitude and behaviors are very immature. I understand she is 18, but sheesh. Dial it back a bit.
3/27/2023 c35 WordsMusicMagic
Very sweet story. I liked the original idea of a Kingdom with a President (not unlike England with a Prime Minister). While mostly light and somewhat predictable, I really enjoyed this snarky Bella and this passionate Edward. The writing was lovely too. Thank you!
Very sweet story. I liked the original idea of a Kingdom with a President (not unlike England with a Prime Minister). While mostly light and somewhat predictable, I really enjoyed this snarky Bella and this passionate Edward. The writing was lovely too. Thank you!
12/4/2022 c35 Joanna Robinson
Brilliant! I absolutely loved this fan fic. The quote at the end “Three things. Struggles, victories and happiness” describes the whole essence but also resonated with my own life. Thank you
Brilliant! I absolutely loved this fan fic. The quote at the end “Three things. Struggles, victories and happiness” describes the whole essence but also resonated with my own life. Thank you
11/10/2022 c8 
3LivCullen
I am really enjoying this story. I can not tell you the last time I have really had so much fun reading a fic last. Bella is such a fun and crazy character.
3LivCullenI am really enjoying this story. I can not tell you the last time I have really had so much fun reading a fic last. Bella is such a fun and crazy character.
5/30/2022 c2 nizzyna
Omg the second hand embarrassment I’m getting from this is brutal. Poor Bella, lol.
Omg the second hand embarrassment I’m getting from this is brutal. Poor Bella, lol.
2/5/2022 c35 2Dollybigmomma
Once I got past the whole "American Royalty" thing in the beginning, I actually was able to relax into and enjoy the story. I just told myself that there'd been some kind of war or something and that the USA had decided to revert to British-style governance as a better working model, though in reality I'd hope that would never happen! At least it worked to settle the weirdness in my mind long enough to get through to the end. Loved this Bella, she was character to read about. Well done!
2DollybigmommaOnce I got past the whole "American Royalty" thing in the beginning, I actually was able to relax into and enjoy the story. I just told myself that there'd been some kind of war or something and that the USA had decided to revert to British-style governance as a better working model, though in reality I'd hope that would never happen! At least it worked to settle the weirdness in my mind long enough to get through to the end. Loved this Bella, she was character to read about. Well done!
8/5/2021 c1 unexpectedsnag
great story. this Edward was very Canon- old fashioned, brooding, sweet, overprotective lol Edward's a lot of times end up being so far from Canon (manwhore Ed) that it's nice to read one that's not
like this Ballsy Bella too! and the low angst factor
great story. this Edward was very Canon- old fashioned, brooding, sweet, overprotective lol Edward's a lot of times end up being so far from Canon (manwhore Ed) that it's nice to read one that's not
like this Ballsy Bella too! and the low angst factor
7/26/2021 c1 AstridCullen
i liked the concept of the story and I think it's pretty unique, but I couldn't get past chapter 1. I can't stand this Bella. She complains too much over small things...
i liked the concept of the story and I think it's pretty unique, but I couldn't get past chapter 1. I can't stand this Bella. She complains too much over small things...