3/27/2023 c35 WordsMusicMagic
Very sweet story. I liked the original idea of a Kingdom with a President (not unlike England with a Prime Minister). While mostly light and somewhat predictable, I really enjoyed this snarky Bella and this passionate Edward. The writing was lovely too. Thank you!
Very sweet story. I liked the original idea of a Kingdom with a President (not unlike England with a Prime Minister). While mostly light and somewhat predictable, I really enjoyed this snarky Bella and this passionate Edward. The writing was lovely too. Thank you!
12/4/2022 c35 Joanna Robinson
Brilliant! I absolutely loved this fan fic. The quote at the end “Three things. Struggles, victories and happiness” describes the whole essence but also resonated with my own life. Thank you
Brilliant! I absolutely loved this fan fic. The quote at the end “Three things. Struggles, victories and happiness” describes the whole essence but also resonated with my own life. Thank you
11/10/2022 c8 3LivCullen
I am really enjoying this story. I can not tell you the last time I have really had so much fun reading a fic last. Bella is such a fun and crazy character.
I am really enjoying this story. I can not tell you the last time I have really had so much fun reading a fic last. Bella is such a fun and crazy character.
5/30/2022 c2 nizzyna
Omg the second hand embarrassment I’m getting from this is brutal. Poor Bella, lol.
Omg the second hand embarrassment I’m getting from this is brutal. Poor Bella, lol.
2/5/2022 c35 2Dollybigmomma
Once I got past the whole "American Royalty" thing in the beginning, I actually was able to relax into and enjoy the story. I just told myself that there'd been some kind of war or something and that the USA had decided to revert to British-style governance as a better working model, though in reality I'd hope that would never happen! At least it worked to settle the weirdness in my mind long enough to get through to the end. Loved this Bella, she was character to read about. Well done!
Once I got past the whole "American Royalty" thing in the beginning, I actually was able to relax into and enjoy the story. I just told myself that there'd been some kind of war or something and that the USA had decided to revert to British-style governance as a better working model, though in reality I'd hope that would never happen! At least it worked to settle the weirdness in my mind long enough to get through to the end. Loved this Bella, she was character to read about. Well done!
8/5/2021 c1 unexpectedsnag
great story. this Edward was very Canon- old fashioned, brooding, sweet, overprotective lol Edward's a lot of times end up being so far from Canon (manwhore Ed) that it's nice to read one that's not
like this Ballsy Bella too! and the low angst factor
great story. this Edward was very Canon- old fashioned, brooding, sweet, overprotective lol Edward's a lot of times end up being so far from Canon (manwhore Ed) that it's nice to read one that's not
like this Ballsy Bella too! and the low angst factor
7/26/2021 c1 AstridCullen
i liked the concept of the story and I think it's pretty unique, but I couldn't get past chapter 1. I can't stand this Bella. She complains too much over small things...
i liked the concept of the story and I think it's pretty unique, but I couldn't get past chapter 1. I can't stand this Bella. She complains too much over small things...
4/18/2021 c35 Guest
Beautiful. You’re an Amazing writer!
Beautiful. You’re an Amazing writer!
1/17/2021 c35 Guest
Read this only today and loved.
Thanks for sharing
Read this only today and loved.
Thanks for sharing