
1/18/2012 c6
23Little-miss-laughs-alot
I know that this is on hiatus, but on the next bit, can you fix the punctuation and paragraphs? It's kinda irritating

I know that this is on hiatus, but on the next bit, can you fix the punctuation and paragraphs? It's kinda irritating
9/1/2011 c6
3booklover707
Good story, but I'm curious, what are 'Chilly Bins'? (Do you mean Eskis?) And it would take more than a month to drive around the whole coast of Australia, but if you limited it to just the coast of queensland, I'm sure that it would take about a month. Just another thing, surely the reactions would have been slightly different? And surley not everyone would have been happy with it? That game me an idea... Maybe someone could contact Dr Denman and then the whole thing gets messed up? Good story so far anyway, keep going! :D

Good story, but I'm curious, what are 'Chilly Bins'? (Do you mean Eskis?) And it would take more than a month to drive around the whole coast of Australia, but if you limited it to just the coast of queensland, I'm sure that it would take about a month. Just another thing, surely the reactions would have been slightly different? And surley not everyone would have been happy with it? That game me an idea... Maybe someone could contact Dr Denman and then the whole thing gets messed up? Good story so far anyway, keep going! :D
6/17/2011 c5
2carrieberries123
Here is an idea if you want to use it what if it was a full moon tonight and Kim and Elliot became a mermaid/merman.

Here is an idea if you want to use it what if it was a full moon tonight and Kim and Elliot became a mermaid/merman.
2/1/2011 c6
4Wonderlust Of A Lost Girl
Crossovers are epic...not that I have read nor watched Twilight & Harry Potter, but I suppose majority rules, eh? Well, anyways actually if your thinking about making it a crossover, I'm all for it, seriously, for any charaters, its usually epic. :]

Crossovers are epic...not that I have read nor watched Twilight & Harry Potter, but I suppose majority rules, eh? Well, anyways actually if your thinking about making it a crossover, I'm all for it, seriously, for any charaters, its usually epic. :]
1/28/2011 c5 Wonderlust Of A Lost Girl
Ugh! Why didn't anyone invite me? Oh yes, I'm not a mermaid, not Australian, and not best friends with Emma, Cleo, Rikki, nor Bella. Well that sucks. Can't wait to see what happens!
Ugh! Why didn't anyone invite me? Oh yes, I'm not a mermaid, not Australian, and not best friends with Emma, Cleo, Rikki, nor Bella. Well that sucks. Can't wait to see what happens!
1/27/2011 c4 Wonderlust Of A Lost Girl
This is your best chapter yet, IMO. :] The picnic is a great stir for something to misshapen or go wrong. Well, can't wait to read more!
This is your best chapter yet, IMO. :] The picnic is a great stir for something to misshapen or go wrong. Well, can't wait to read more!
1/26/2011 c5
9fantasylunargirl
I like so far and Salt and Vinegar are my favourite too, in fact there the only ones i'll eat.

I like so far and Salt and Vinegar are my favourite too, in fact there the only ones i'll eat.
1/26/2011 c3
4Wonderlust Of A Lost Girl
Good... But don't you think its a bit strange they were so unable to in Series 1 (sure they were just getting the hang of things) but then in Series 2 & 3 still...Would they cave that easily... kk. i'll read more soon.

Good... But don't you think its a bit strange they were so unable to in Series 1 (sure they were just getting the hang of things) but then in Series 2 & 3 still...Would they cave that easily... kk. i'll read more soon.
1/26/2011 c5 GothGirl69
Great story really interested :) Update!
Great story really interested :) Update!
1/25/2011 c2 Wonderlust Of A Lost Girl
great! But I don't think Emma's friends are gonna be as understanding!
great! But I don't think Emma's friends are gonna be as understanding!
1/25/2011 c1 Wonderlust Of A Lost Girl
Emma knows about Bella FINALLY. All the other fics they both get lied too. :[ Well Emma telling her Mum is huge!
Emma knows about Bella FINALLY. All the other fics they both get lied too. :[ Well Emma telling her Mum is huge!
1/25/2011 c1 tyronebeard4913yahoo.com
i like the story so far keep it up this is the begining of something amazing!
rock on!
i like the story so far keep it up this is the begining of something amazing!
rock on!