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4/13/2012 c1 Mystery
It was a really good story that I cried but what was in the later n I don't get how Paul's kids called ash,misty,may n drew aunties n uncles don't u have to be related
12/18/2011 c1 2xXxGlaceonxXx
This was really good. But you can't help but add in someone who dies, can you? But seriously, it's really good. Sad, but good.

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8/5/2011 c1 1Allie-Cat 83
Noo! Wah! Dawn died! *sniffs* Honestly, I thought this was pretty good. :D I wonder if Paul really did care a lot for Dawn... I mean I know he didn't want her to leave and he told his kids that they'll see her again... but he didn't even try to stop her from getting to the car and he could be just trying to cheer the kids up. But this really was sad and sweet and I loved it a lot! :3

I wish I knew what Dawn wrote to Paul... *sigh* And I wish that Paul and the others learned that the kids could see ghosts (well they could see Dawn) Their reactions would be hilarious! xD But mostly I just wanna know what Dawn wrote in the letter... and Paul's reaction to it and also if Dawn appears before Paul and somehow Paul can see her. Maybe you could write a sequel? Please? *insert puppy dog eyes here* (idk if that will convince you but I wanted to do that anyhow xD)

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7/16/2011 c1 15mednin
It's sad :( Good job, though, I hope you keep writing more fanfictions! ^^
6/15/2011 c1 18writlings
No this was not horrible. It was very good.

Great job!
2/1/2011 c1 6ImperfectLuck
hmmm... Not too much to say on this one. But IkariShipping is awfully popular D:

Anyway, how did Paul actuall FEEL about Dawn's death? "We'll see her again" does show remorse, i suppose, but it could also be interpreted as him just trying to comfort his children. In other words, you leave it open as to if Paul regrets it or if he's just a jerk.

Oh look. I did have much to say, after all.

Anyway good luck for the competition... Despite me being in it, too.
1/25/2011 c1 18Waveripple of Team Sunrise
Not lieing her, this made me cry. Cry happy tears. It was soo sweet! *daps eyes* Thank you for writing it!
1/25/2011 c1 4Mew Mew Pachirisu
Dawn died T.T She was awesome though T.T Love it! xD Kids rule! we see ghosts!

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