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12/28/2013 c1 Guest
Oi oi oi
12/28/2013 c1 Guest
You're why do you spell mum "mom"?
3/23/2012 c2 5admetaxo
Nice chapter! Once again, I love your A/N in the middle of your chapters. They make the story even more unique. I don't find it weird the abrupt change in feelings. Families that really love each another and are as close as Dee's seem should be able to forgive even if they don't forget. I really hope you update soon since you haven't updated in over a year
3/23/2012 c1 admetaxo
Wow! That's one amazing confession to just pop out like that! So Dee can control water... No wait it's force fields right? Anyway good chapter and I actually liked your rambling in the author's notes. It shows your personality
4/2/2011 c2 bluelover
Yo! I like your story, I'm going to favorite it! I hope your not one of those people who torture me by not updating for, like, ever. Anyways, love the story line and where it's going, oh and update soon! :)
3/19/2011 c2 twittertweettwat
pretty cool
2/22/2011 c2 1roomofangels
*looks at keyboard* ... *looks at screan* ... DAMN IT! No bow button!
2/15/2011 c2 nicia
more pleass thanks u
2/14/2011 c1 Jess
that was really goooood.! i was like so into it. :)
2/8/2011 c1 IaMrAnDoM
Favorite Australian animal: Thylacoleo carnifex: the marsupial lion. Now extinct, sadly.
2/3/2011 c2 5Ash Colored Wings
Its really good! Delilah isn't too ghetto, perfect, or Mary-Sueish. By ghetto I mean she was on the streets since she was a toddler, or wears all black or something dumb like that. Update please! :)
2/1/2011 c2 6Miri17
This is a really cool set-up, and I'm intrigued to find out what you do next (especially when you actually get to Sky High!). The family situation is albeit awkward, but still adds to the plot (and I love Tank, he rocks my socks:D). You're a very funny and entertaining author, so I can't wait to see what you do next.

I'm going to give you a heads up/warning before you fall into the same trap I've fallen into with my fanfictions: DON'T LET DELILAH BECOME A MARY SUE! The fact that she can so easily control water when she's only *just* discovered her powers is too unbelievable and doesn't add tension. Maybe by the end of the story she can do all that, but if she just discovered it, you have a lot of opportunities for mess-ups and big conflict, depending on what she does with it.

Update soon! :D
1/31/2011 c2 8Talis Ruadair
Ah good ol' hay...I like the premise, I only wonder if the pyro is averse to getting wet...please update soon!
1/31/2011 c2 8Mighty Lion
Ohh, I'm glad Dee forgave her mom! :D and I like how her powers are developing fast already. Please update whenever possible!
1/31/2011 c1 a
Keep updating.
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