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9/26/2011 c6 anon
Great story. I love it!
4/12/2011 c6 35xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx
Loved it!
3/12/2011 c6 BLEACHLOVE1011
mou..the part with Shuuhei and Rangiku ended it for me, but i read on to see a sweet ending. Im just a Hardcore GinRan HitsuHina fan is all. lol
2/23/2011 c6 3bookwormtiff
Hey Aprillup!

Hehe... I take out the 20th review! Ohohohoho! :D

Congrats on finishing! The ending was quite cute actually, it couldn't really have ended any other way. And as your beta and friend, I'm really proud of you! *glomps*

Y'know, you should really make inventing Kido your pastime. =-=' Was totally fooled... :)

Keep writing more awesome stories! And help with mine! :D

Ja, mata!

Bookwormtiff.
2/22/2011 c6 7icyangel27
Awww~ Nah, I like cheesy stuff; it makes life lovable. Toshiro and Momo's kiss was so cute ^_^ PCE
2/22/2011 c6 3thekawaiifangirl
Awwh, thats the end? WAAH! it was so good! I need more HitsuHina in my life. :P anyways, it wasn't corny it was SWEET! 3 you didnt exactly elaborate on the kiss so I'm just gonna say it was a light kiss that left toshiro speechless and then she leaned her head on his. I think that makes it more romantic ;) anyways, it was a really

Good story! I loved it(:
2/22/2011 c6 18theramenfreak
Lol, very nice! I think it was corney in a good way. I like it :)
2/14/2011 c5 3thekawaiifangirl
great job! I'm loving this story chapter by chapter! Hmm, it seems Hitsugaya-kun is jeeaalouss:P PLZ UPDATE!

P.S: I actually thought that was a real kido spell xD
2/14/2011 c5 7icyangel27
Aww Toshiro, why'd you have to yell at Momo? PCE
2/9/2011 c4 1Kattz
! dont' take ichigo! my friend is going 2 try 2 use him and force him & rukia 2gether!
2/7/2011 c4 3thekawaiifangirl
OMG! im waaaiiittiiinnngg for the nxt chap already! lol, oh nd ur welcome(: i reeally couldnt wait for this chap nd im so glad it came xD UPDATE PLZ!
2/7/2011 c4 2Jesse S. D.Vera
I am charmed with me the slap to buffoonery

Kyaaaaaa that pretty chapter you have q continue
2/7/2011 c4 7icyangel27
There's no more Ichiruki or Ginran...TT_TT Tleast we can count on Hitsuhina! PCE
2/4/2011 c3 3bookwormtiff
Hehe... nice chappie! Sorry but I had no time to beta this for you, just read it today... :( I'll go over Chapter Four if I can.

So, anyway, it's pretty good aside from the occasional spelling/grammatical error *pokepoke*.

Moar fluff plz! Kudasai! :D

Bookwormtiff!
2/4/2011 c3 3thekawaiifangirl
OMG! wat are they going to ask momo? awh, shiro-chan's grandmother died :'( plz updatee!
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