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6/15/2012 c46 pablo234
well ... i guess if you through enough dirt at someone mathematically it eventually will hide gold ... i believe that the tag was "VG cats" not "stolen characters that weren't even cannon to begin with that i allowed to swell and flood the entirety of a potentially decent story. Like i said you can spam words to your heart's content HOWEVER it won't make them any more meaningful
2/20/2012 c41 Guest
Why did you make this all depressing, it was good till bow
9/14/2011 c46 1MintyFishbowl
I can't believe I still haven't given this story a review, despite how much we've interacted as writers...

Anyway, this story is great. You add so much detail and description, as if you're showing us the story instead of telling us it, which is what all writers strive to do (including me). Spelling and grammar is no problem, and the story is so fluid and balanced, you almost never stretch things out or speed through them.

Criticism? This is always the toughest part to do in a review. Please don't hate me after this...

In the earlier chapters, Xander feels a lot like a Mary-Sue character. He can paint, shoot, change his eye color, play guitar, is a master in martial-arts,is really good at games, and even knows how to use ancient swords. I'm all for giving a character detail, and you certainly do that, but...it just goes a bit too far at times for ol' Xandy.

Other than that, that's really about it. I still hope that this review made you smile.

As for the reviewer below me, it's alright if you don't like the story, but AT THE VERY LEAST give some actual elaboration behind your reasoning. There's a difference between critiquing and just being a whiny bitch.
8/27/2011 c46 Grayson
It's amazing how terrible this story was. I actually read it through and, at first, it was bad, but I figured it would improve.

...I was wrong.

I would tell you all the things wrong with your story, and give good critique, but at this point, it would seem like pissing in the wind.

Maybe I wouldn't be so harsh on this story, if it weren't for the royally unlikable OC, Xander. From the very moment you introduced him, I was banging my head on the keyboard.

And, all of the bad writing was actually copied too. You didn't even come up with this, yet you royally succeeded in making me hate it.

Call it a flame if you'd like, but I call this my opinion, and the damn truth. If you can't handle a little tough criticism, maybe that's why the story was bad.
8/27/2011 c20 Said
I'm sorry, but this story was just a massive face-palm to me. 'Xander' is the biggest Mary Sue I have ever seen.

He's a sensitive gamer artist musician weapon expert martial artist that has rainbow eyes and can read minds...

Sorry, but SOMEONE had to give it to you straight.
7/25/2011 c4 2theepitomeofrandom
oh and congrats on writing the longest fanfiction ever...lol
7/25/2011 c46 theepitomeofrandom
no of course not because of that...then the rating would go up...or unless it was not depicted...okay then...wait...WHO BLEW UP XANDER?
7/25/2011 c45 theepitomeofrandom
okay...xander has watched v for vendetta too much...or something...
7/25/2011 c44 theepitomeofrandom
so...the reaper's eyes...wait...why the hell does he care if tyler dies now?...they are a good person...and he now has confirmation that heaven does exist...in retrospect...

hell, in his position, id try to steal death's sword thing...then take over hell...
7/25/2011 c36 theepitomeofrandom
i hope being a main oc is enough to give you respawn powers...like the main characters normally have...erm...
7/25/2011 c32 theepitomeofrandom
at this point, xander had better pray that aeris doesn't own a chainsaw...
7/25/2011 c30 theepitomeofrandom
dear lord, do they want aeris to pull a SHOTGUN ON THEM?
7/25/2011 c29 theepitomeofrandom
lol you fear the readers...and you did mention inspiration source...so...its not really stealing...LOL...
7/25/2011 c27 theepitomeofrandom
oh...then...she...so he forgot about...oh that's sad...wow...um, it sure took tyler a while to find xander then...and...how the hell did...unless...oh...they died while he was in a coma?...wow
7/25/2011 c26 theepitomeofrandom
DOUBLE KILL

MULTI KILL

LUDICROUS KILL

MMMMMMONSTER KILL

HOLY SHIT

...

sadism much?
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