
4/13/2011 c12 BobrechaunProductions
I just wanted to tell you that i love this story. I also read the first part and all throughout i have loved your style and the way you handle jo's magnificent characters.
I especially like your use of shifting viewpoints. It really seems to maximise the impact of each moment. Particularly when they were in the hell hole in the prev story. I can't wait to read the next part and i will be following this fic 3
I just wanted to tell you that i love this story. I also read the first part and all throughout i have loved your style and the way you handle jo's magnificent characters.
I especially like your use of shifting viewpoints. It really seems to maximise the impact of each moment. Particularly when they were in the hell hole in the prev story. I can't wait to read the next part and i will be following this fic 3
4/1/2011 c12
587yellow 14
Someone put up a way to get around the problem ff.net was having. Still, at least it's been fixed quickly. (For ff.net) Keep updating

Someone put up a way to get around the problem ff.net was having. Still, at least it's been fixed quickly. (For ff.net) Keep updating
3/31/2011 c12
30FuzzyBee013
Awesome chapter. I really want to know all about James' arm a bit more so hopefully you can update soon. The same thing had happened with my account so I don't blame you for that.

Awesome chapter. I really want to know all about James' arm a bit more so hopefully you can update soon. The same thing had happened with my account so I don't blame you for that.
3/30/2011 c11 A-Z-animal-freak
Lol, you were sober? Interesting comment...Good chapter, try and get the next one up as soon as you can, enjoying this a lot, and liked the previous one.
Cheers,
A-Z.
Lol, you were sober? Interesting comment...Good chapter, try and get the next one up as soon as you can, enjoying this a lot, and liked the previous one.
Cheers,
A-Z.
3/27/2011 c11
30FuzzyBee013
I really like this story, I've been reading it this whole hour. I haven't read the one that came before it but I understand it perfectly and it has convinced me to read the other one. Keep up the good work and update soon.

I really like this story, I've been reading it this whole hour. I haven't read the one that came before it but I understand it perfectly and it has convinced me to read the other one. Keep up the good work and update soon.
3/14/2011 c11 MysticJadeShoe
This chapter was hilarious! xD Sirius and James snogging had me laughing so hard I could scarcely breathe.
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This chapter was hilarious! xD Sirius and James snogging had me laughing so hard I could scarcely breathe.
Here! A present for you! http:/mysticjadeshoe.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3azh2p
3/13/2011 c11
18Omamori
"You…threw a book…at a teacher?" class!
Primary school is sort of correct; different people call it different things. Though the majority vote, as far as I'm aware, is 'first school'. Not that bothered about that though, it was too great a chapter for that!

"You…threw a book…at a teacher?" class!
Primary school is sort of correct; different people call it different things. Though the majority vote, as far as I'm aware, is 'first school'. Not that bothered about that though, it was too great a chapter for that!
3/13/2011 c11
11Lady of the Witty Remarks
hahaha. "Why is it green?"
I love this story. =D It's amazinggggggggg! I love you, too. Thanks you for the updating. =D

hahaha. "Why is it green?"
I love this story. =D It's amazinggggggggg! I love you, too. Thanks you for the updating. =D
3/10/2011 c10
18Omamori
OMG! His arms hurting again! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, and that exchange between James and Lily at the end, so sweet!

OMG! His arms hurting again! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, and that exchange between James and Lily at the end, so sweet!
3/8/2011 c10
11Lady of the Witty Remarks
Awesome chapter! poor Lily. I was giggling that whole time.
I love this story, just so you know. I get a happy feeling every time I see that you've updated. So please, please, PLEASEEEEEE update soon! I'll love you forever...

Awesome chapter! poor Lily. I was giggling that whole time.
I love this story, just so you know. I get a happy feeling every time I see that you've updated. So please, please, PLEASEEEEEE update soon! I'll love you forever...
3/8/2011 c10
6ClamKidToTheRescue
:) great chapter! :) its really sweet that lily waited downstairs for him :)

:) great chapter! :) its really sweet that lily waited downstairs for him :)