for Any Tree Can Drop an Apple8/16/2011 c1 
9Sunshine Depression
You know, for a fic where "nothing went right," this sure is good. Seriously. I never thought that I would go for any incarnation of this particular pairing, but this was stellar. Not only was it a good premise, you have a really good writing style. You caught the essence Minamimoto perfectly. Do the FF community a favor and keep writing. If this is an example of a fic that disappointed you, I'd love to read something you're proud of.
9Sunshine DepressionYou know, for a fic where "nothing went right," this sure is good. Seriously. I never thought that I would go for any incarnation of this particular pairing, but this was stellar. Not only was it a good premise, you have a really good writing style. You caught the essence Minamimoto perfectly. Do the FF community a favor and keep writing. If this is an example of a fic that disappointed you, I'd love to read something you're proud of.
8/16/2011 c1 26the hikikomori life
Hey! c: I've never played TWEWY, so I have no idea what's going on here, but this is pretty rad. Your writing style - or perhaps it's the character's POV - is really snappy and fierce, and I'm partial to that sort of thing. Makes me want to play the game so I can figure out what's happening.
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26the hikikomori lifeHey! c: I've never played TWEWY, so I have no idea what's going on here, but this is pretty rad. Your writing style - or perhaps it's the character's POV - is really snappy and fierce, and I'm partial to that sort of thing. Makes me want to play the game so I can figure out what's happening.
I tried to PM you a second ago, but it seems you've disabled that feature. ;A; I love making online friends in the same fandoms as I am, so if you're interested in getting to know each other, you can find me at andreaphobia at livejournal, or email me at ajcrowley at gmail. c:
6/8/2011 c1 XD
I actually think you captured Sho's voice really well, especially for your first TWEWY fic! I liked the part where Joshua looked directly at him 'cause he knew he was there. It made me laugh. :D
Keep up the good work!
P.S.
I loooooooove the summary! XD
I actually think you captured Sho's voice really well, especially for your first TWEWY fic! I liked the part where Joshua looked directly at him 'cause he knew he was there. It made me laugh. :D
Keep up the good work!
P.S.
I loooooooove the summary! XD
2/1/2011 c1 98womanaction
Your Sho narrative epicly rocked:) And the part about him "using Stellar Flurry to force his way out of the womb"...delightful xD Great fic.
98womanactionYour Sho narrative epicly rocked:) And the part about him "using Stellar Flurry to force his way out of the womb"...delightful xD Great fic.