for Naruto's Sister The Ten Tailed Fox9/11/2015 c4 Guest
Please continue
Please continue
9/12/2014 c4 Guest
I love this fan fiction when is the next chapter ;)
I love this fan fiction when is the next chapter ;)
10/24/2013 c1 
1IamMidnightCity
Please update? Me likey da story! Please for a hudge fangirl who want happy lil' Naruto with an older sister!? Plus I wanna c how they react!
1IamMidnightCityPlease update? Me likey da story! Please for a hudge fangirl who want happy lil' Naruto with an older sister!? Plus I wanna c how they react!
8/4/2013 c4 xedr1c
Pls. make more
Pls. make more
6/29/2013 c4 1Moonlily22
How could you do this to me? do you know how excited to know what will hgappen i became? gr...
Please tell me you will update soon *puppy face* please?
I'm like really intrigued to know...
1Moonlily22How could you do this to me? do you know how excited to know what will hgappen i became? gr...
Please tell me you will update soon *puppy face* please?
I'm like really intrigued to know...
5/22/2012 c4 kitty-cat19
wright some more
wright some more
1/2/2012 c1 what is this shit
What the fuck man.
What. The. Fuck.
I mean seriously, regardless of the fact that this your first Naruto story you can't be that deluded into thinking that the Kyuubi could have an older sister. If you don't know anything then you should go read the wiki.
The Sage of Six Paths made the bijuu by separating the chakra of the juubi (ten tails). There is no such thing as an older sister to a senient being made out of chakra.
Dammit, if you're going to write a fanfic then at least make it remotely heeding the laws of canon.
What the fuck man.
What. The. Fuck.
I mean seriously, regardless of the fact that this your first Naruto story you can't be that deluded into thinking that the Kyuubi could have an older sister. If you don't know anything then you should go read the wiki.
The Sage of Six Paths made the bijuu by separating the chakra of the juubi (ten tails). There is no such thing as an older sister to a senient being made out of chakra.
Dammit, if you're going to write a fanfic then at least make it remotely heeding the laws of canon.
12/18/2011 c4 1Pein's Kid
this is really Good!
Hey can i use this on wattpad?
I'll write it in your name don't worry..
1Pein's Kidthis is really Good!
Hey can i use this on wattpad?
I'll write it in your name don't worry..
4/6/2011 c4 kiara
i liked it yuo should continue
i liked it yuo should continue
2/4/2011 c4 2Narudevilfan
I like it! It's fitting, although I can't think of why. Hmm, The randomness of this story is throwing off my ideas, I can't think of anything to add.
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2NarudevilfanI like it! It's fitting, although I can't think of why. Hmm, The randomness of this story is throwing off my ideas, I can't think of anything to add.
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2/2/2011 c2 Narudevilfan
It's not a bad idea, but your story is a bit rough. I like where this is going so far though, so good job on that.
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It's not a bad idea, but your story is a bit rough. I like where this is going so far though, so good job on that.
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