for His Last Cigarette9/29/2021 c1 GGirl
Fricken gorgeous
Fricken gorgeous
5/31/2011 c1 
1Narniafan96
Oh my! That was so sad! I was crying at the end! I *sob* really *sob* liked it!
1Narniafan96Oh my! That was so sad! I was crying at the end! I *sob* really *sob* liked it!
2/9/2011 c1 164Kitty O
So nice, very pretty and thus we discover why Jack SHOULD NOT leave New York. Very sad though. I was hoping for a rescue till the end.
164Kitty OSo nice, very pretty and thus we discover why Jack SHOULD NOT leave New York. Very sad though. I was hoping for a rescue till the end.
2/1/2011 c1 1silenceEchoes
That was a great story. I always love a good, depressing story. It was very good, I love the idea of his dream getting twisted around, turned upside down. Sad, and wonderful. Just something about how nothing seems to work out right for him, how he never really gets what he wants...
Loved it.
~Jordyn
1silenceEchoesThat was a great story. I always love a good, depressing story. It was very good, I love the idea of his dream getting twisted around, turned upside down. Sad, and wonderful. Just something about how nothing seems to work out right for him, how he never really gets what he wants...
Loved it.
~Jordyn
2/1/2011 c1 1AdrenalineRush16
Happy birthday Christian Bale! Don't you feel special? Your top fangirl just wrote a story about your character being executed for a crime he didn't commit. Oh happy day! Jeeze Stress, are you sure you love Jack? ;) Just kidding. There is something about showing characters your love through killing them.
...No, I don't understand that mystery either. Tough love perhaps? Lol.
What can I say? Of course I liked it. YOU wrote it! :) An interesting concept and another Jack fic in this world? Well, where can you go wrong? :)
CTB!
~Adren
1AdrenalineRush16Happy birthday Christian Bale! Don't you feel special? Your top fangirl just wrote a story about your character being executed for a crime he didn't commit. Oh happy day! Jeeze Stress, are you sure you love Jack? ;) Just kidding. There is something about showing characters your love through killing them.
...No, I don't understand that mystery either. Tough love perhaps? Lol.
What can I say? Of course I liked it. YOU wrote it! :) An interesting concept and another Jack fic in this world? Well, where can you go wrong? :)
CTB!
~Adren
1/31/2011 c1 8HamAndCheese
Nice "Happy Birthday"... lol you kill his character! Just messin' though. This was actually a very good little story. It was very eloquent. Poor Jack... I'm gonna go cry now...
8HamAndCheeseNice "Happy Birthday"... lol you kill his character! Just messin' though. This was actually a very good little story. It was very eloquent. Poor Jack... I'm gonna go cry now...
1/31/2011 c1 Clairels10
Well, this is not your typical story, is it? It's bold and daring and not very pleasant, but like all of your fiction, it's a pleasure to read. Thank you.
Well, this is not your typical story, is it? It's bold and daring and not very pleasant, but like all of your fiction, it's a pleasure to read. Thank you.
1/31/2011 c1 Zippy190
VERY well written, interesting & disturbing story. In fact, I think C Bale would have appreciated it.
VERY well written, interesting & disturbing story. In fact, I think C Bale would have appreciated it.
1/31/2011 c1 22Joker is Poker with a J
Ahh, I love the irony. What a wonderful one-shot, though it wasn't exactly wonderful for Jack, was it? I must have a sick sense of humor because I like this so much (Feel free to Judge me. I'm judging myself!) Great job!
Truly,
Joker is Poker with a J~
22Joker is Poker with a JAhh, I love the irony. What a wonderful one-shot, though it wasn't exactly wonderful for Jack, was it? I must have a sick sense of humor because I like this so much (Feel free to Judge me. I'm judging myself!) Great job!
Truly,
Joker is Poker with a J~
1/30/2011 c1 wordsarebinding
I've always thought that Jack would find himself in some sort of trouble if he ever made it to Sante Fe. I liked how you began and ended this with lyrics from Santa Fe, it was fitting.
I've always thought that Jack would find himself in some sort of trouble if he ever made it to Sante Fe. I liked how you began and ended this with lyrics from Santa Fe, it was fitting.