for Resident Evil: XCrisis3/26/2013 c1 
5ReosAme
I like the way you parallel everyone's stories together, just to keep the timeline straight. But what I really like that you've done, is Claire's scenario. It's eerie. It's lonely. And if you are heading in the direction I think you are, it could be set up to be absolutely terrifying. Add another chapter soon! I cant wait to read more! You get a 9/10 from me. D
5ReosAmeI like the way you parallel everyone's stories together, just to keep the timeline straight. But what I really like that you've done, is Claire's scenario. It's eerie. It's lonely. And if you are heading in the direction I think you are, it could be set up to be absolutely terrifying. Add another chapter soon! I cant wait to read more! You get a 9/10 from me. D
2/3/2011 c2 16Sheenah267
Not bad. So Claire is back babysitting? Hmm...I bet she won't have much time caring about that XD
Not sure about the RE5 moments...I know you want to do a parallel with Claire's situation, but I wouldn't put too much focus on it. (could get confusing)
I'm curious, keep going !
16Sheenah267Not bad. So Claire is back babysitting? Hmm...I bet she won't have much time caring about that XD
Not sure about the RE5 moments...I know you want to do a parallel with Claire's situation, but I wouldn't put too much focus on it. (could get confusing)
I'm curious, keep going !