11/13/2011 c4 34Zanzibar1
Yay! I was able to read tonight! This is starting to get good! ...I mean it was good before, but I mean it's getting even better! poor Tsukune. he's always being dragged around despite what he wants. Haha and Yosho! Hahaha! His just laughing at the end cracks me up! Poor Tsukune probably doesn't even realize what he's getting into.
I'm now very curious as to how they will all find out about how Yosho twisted the truth around. Also where did Shara go? Seeing as she disappeared. I'm super curious to find out the back story on that one!
No spoilers though. :)
Great chapter! Update soon!
Yay! I was able to read tonight! This is starting to get good! ...I mean it was good before, but I mean it's getting even better! poor Tsukune. he's always being dragged around despite what he wants. Haha and Yosho! Hahaha! His just laughing at the end cracks me up! Poor Tsukune probably doesn't even realize what he's getting into.
I'm now very curious as to how they will all find out about how Yosho twisted the truth around. Also where did Shara go? Seeing as she disappeared. I'm super curious to find out the back story on that one!
No spoilers though. :)
Great chapter! Update soon!
7/1/2011 c2 34Zanzibar1
So I don't know what happened to the last review, but here is this one.
I love the description you have. It's well written out and thought about. The characters were described really well. I could totally picture them in my head.
And yosho's reaction to the news. Great job! I could see his shock and hear the cup and saucer crashing to the ground. Great job overall! Looking forward to the next chapter! Update soon!
So I don't know what happened to the last review, but here is this one.
I love the description you have. It's well written out and thought about. The characters were described really well. I could totally picture them in my head.
And yosho's reaction to the news. Great job! I could see his shock and hear the cup and saucer crashing to the ground. Great job overall! Looking forward to the next chapter! Update soon!