12/15/2015 c4 11socialgirl378
Wow, and why I do feel like this story is gonna go very dark from here? This is based off Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde after all. I thought it would take place in the book though, especially with the title.
Wow, and why I do feel like this story is gonna go very dark from here? This is based off Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde after all. I thought it would take place in the book though, especially with the title.
5/31/2013 c4 25GuardianWitchDemiGhost
VGF:Please update this is good. :) I will end with my goodbyes,Ta.
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VGF:Please update this is good. :) I will end with my goodbyes,Ta.
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10/14/2011 c4 Jokergirl
Please update. I check this story everyday for a new chapter.
Please update. I check this story everyday for a new chapter.
9/8/2011 c1 DDF
cool.
cool.
8/27/2011 c4 8Eelyak22
I know I reviewed this chapter already but I want to add one more thing. You don't have to do thid but I think this would be cool. Once Danny cahnges into Phantom, you should do a point of view for him. As if he can see through Phantoms eyes but can't control anything he does. If you do that than you need to describe his feelings toward everything stil in Danny's point of view. Ithink that would be amazing.
I know I reviewed this chapter already but I want to add one more thing. You don't have to do thid but I think this would be cool. Once Danny cahnges into Phantom, you should do a point of view for him. As if he can see through Phantoms eyes but can't control anything he does. If you do that than you need to describe his feelings toward everything stil in Danny's point of view. Ithink that would be amazing.
8/19/2011 c3 Eelyak22
Cool story. I have read Jeckyle and Hyde and every time Jeckyle changes he drinks a potion. I think the reason I liked the story was because Jeckyle had liked Hyde in a creepy way. You should start making Danny turn evil himself until he kills himself or solves the problem. Good thinking though, I would have never imagined that Phantom would have been evil.
Cool story. I have read Jeckyle and Hyde and every time Jeckyle changes he drinks a potion. I think the reason I liked the story was because Jeckyle had liked Hyde in a creepy way. You should start making Danny turn evil himself until he kills himself or solves the problem. Good thinking though, I would have never imagined that Phantom would have been evil.
4/16/2011 c4 David Phantom
Whoa... You should make your chapters longer. I'm tired of being left on cliffies!
Whoa... You should make your chapters longer. I'm tired of being left on cliffies!
4/16/2011 c2 David Phantom
I get it now. He wasn't Phantom yet. This was a twist on his original transformation that made him half-ghost!
I get it now. He wasn't Phantom yet. This was a twist on his original transformation that made him half-ghost!