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5/7/2016 c4 SweetPantomime
i just wanna say how awesome this is, there arent really much stories about one outs here (im actually looking for an ideguchi one rn) and yours is by far the greatest keep it up
i just wanna say how awesome this is, there arent really much stories about one outs here (im actually looking for an ideguchi one rn) and yours is by far the greatest keep it up
1/4/2015 c4 
1Silver Blur
This is a really cute story, even if you haven't updated in quite the time. Oh well. I like this anyways and will continue liking this! Even if it kills me! XD
1Silver BlurThis is a really cute story, even if you haven't updated in quite the time. Oh well. I like this anyways and will continue liking this! Even if it kills me! XD
10/20/2013 c4 1Kongo Isamu
Please update this story, i really love it. I love Akira and how u protray Toua. Please update soon. I will however long just for u to update this story!
1Kongo IsamuPlease update this story, i really love it. I love Akira and how u protray Toua. Please update soon. I will however long just for u to update this story!
5/1/2013 c1 3FunkEater
Hm... this story was last updated two years ago so I probably shouldn't expect an update but... PLEASE UPDATE. PUH-LEAAAASE. This is probably the best out of 's very much scarce supply of One Outs Fanfics. The development is natural and it isn't very hard to picture Toua getting along with someone like Akira and I'd really like to see what happens next between them, plus I also want to see what became of the others.
But anyways, thank you thank you thank you for writing this story!
-Iggy
3FunkEaterHm... this story was last updated two years ago so I probably shouldn't expect an update but... PLEASE UPDATE. PUH-LEAAAASE. This is probably the best out of 's very much scarce supply of One Outs Fanfics. The development is natural and it isn't very hard to picture Toua getting along with someone like Akira and I'd really like to see what happens next between them, plus I also want to see what became of the others.
But anyways, thank you thank you thank you for writing this story!
-Iggy
3/7/2013 c4 16Keyblade Princess 13
I like it. U should totally continue this story. Its good and has great potential. So please. Continue it. Peace out. Have a nice, none abusive day.
16Keyblade Princess 13I like it. U should totally continue this story. Its good and has great potential. So please. Continue it. Peace out. Have a nice, none abusive day.
11/7/2012 c4 2Quantula
Oh oh oh Tokuchi.
"..but your confidence in me is pleasing."
I love that line : )
Please keep writing! The more good One Outs fanfiction, the better!
2QuantulaOh oh oh Tokuchi.
"..but your confidence in me is pleasing."
I love that line : )
Please keep writing! The more good One Outs fanfiction, the better!
11/7/2012 c1 Quantula
OMG I really like this! Your character is really cool and Tokuchi is written awesomely ) This might be my favorite so far!
Only one little nitpick-it doesn't snow in Okinawa! But still- gambling and yakuza! I'm so excited!
OMG I really like this! Your character is really cool and Tokuchi is written awesomely ) This might be my favorite so far!
Only one little nitpick-it doesn't snow in Okinawa! But still- gambling and yakuza! I'm so excited!
5/19/2012 c1 2FallingDark
Wow! This is amazing! I love your FF. I also like your oc. She seems pretty cool and strong! It was pure epicness,on her side, as she beat those guys!
Ps; Please update.
2FallingDarkWow! This is amazing! I love your FF. I also like your oc. She seems pretty cool and strong! It was pure epicness,on her side, as she beat those guys!
Ps; Please update.
12/16/2011 c4 Micky Moon
(Too lazy to log in.)
But wow. ^^” Okay...this story was...lovely. I love Ones Out so seeing a piece of this is a delight. There are some grammar mistakes and typos you might want to check over though. Cliches were also heavily used and, I'm sorry, I had to cringe at that.
But great storyline! I loved the chemistry between the couple (can't remember their names...). Their relationship seemed so natural and way to make Touichi (misspelled, gomen) more...human. Ones Out doesn't really reveal more characterization than it should so your piece really filled the problem the manga faced.
You haven't updated in a very longtime but I really hope that you do since this is a very wonderful story. ^^
(Too lazy to log in.)
But wow. ^^” Okay...this story was...lovely. I love Ones Out so seeing a piece of this is a delight. There are some grammar mistakes and typos you might want to check over though. Cliches were also heavily used and, I'm sorry, I had to cringe at that.
But great storyline! I loved the chemistry between the couple (can't remember their names...). Their relationship seemed so natural and way to make Touichi (misspelled, gomen) more...human. Ones Out doesn't really reveal more characterization than it should so your piece really filled the problem the manga faced.
You haven't updated in a very longtime but I really hope that you do since this is a very wonderful story. ^^
12/14/2011 c2 Pyrane
I'm looking foward the next chapter ^^
Think of us from time to time !
***Pyrane***
I'm looking foward the next chapter ^^
Think of us from time to time !
***Pyrane***
12/14/2011 c4 mute-by-choice
I was really happy to see this. I'm a big fan of One Outs so I was overjoyed to see a good fanfiction for it.
I was really happy to see this. I'm a big fan of One Outs so I was overjoyed to see a good fanfiction for it.