for the Road trip3/7/2011 c6 
3Stygian.Wolf
y u giving it uppp? its hilarious! i love it! please tell me why you are giving it up.
3Stygian.Wolfy u giving it uppp? its hilarious! i love it! please tell me why you are giving it up.
3/3/2011 c2 TheIceCubeCancer
I like the idea you have (I still need to read the rest of the chapters though) but I wanted to point out a thing that make no sense at all:
Artemis POV
We walked down the stairs to see what Athena wanted. As I was walking I thought that out of all the male Olympians, it was nice she got paired with Hermes, because he wasn't a flirty womanizer like some of the other gods. I mean, if Apollo wasn't my brother he would have just slept with me, but Hermes offered to go on the couch. We got on to the bottom of the stairs and saw the guys crowded around a letter.
You start of with Artemis POV - Great start.
In your second sentence you write: I thought that out of all the male Olympians, it was nice she got paired with Hermes - You paired Athena with Poseidon (Yay!) and Artemis with Hermes.
Then in your next sentence you write: I mean, if Apollo wasn't my brother he would have just slept with me. Artemis and Apollo are twins so you seem to have started to write something then changed your mind or left it for a moment, came back and forgotten a bit of what you were writing.
I just thought you might want to know that. Besides that I like it (So far)
I like the idea you have (I still need to read the rest of the chapters though) but I wanted to point out a thing that make no sense at all:
Artemis POV
We walked down the stairs to see what Athena wanted. As I was walking I thought that out of all the male Olympians, it was nice she got paired with Hermes, because he wasn't a flirty womanizer like some of the other gods. I mean, if Apollo wasn't my brother he would have just slept with me, but Hermes offered to go on the couch. We got on to the bottom of the stairs and saw the guys crowded around a letter.
You start of with Artemis POV - Great start.
In your second sentence you write: I thought that out of all the male Olympians, it was nice she got paired with Hermes - You paired Athena with Poseidon (Yay!) and Artemis with Hermes.
Then in your next sentence you write: I mean, if Apollo wasn't my brother he would have just slept with me. Artemis and Apollo are twins so you seem to have started to write something then changed your mind or left it for a moment, came back and forgotten a bit of what you were writing.
I just thought you might want to know that. Besides that I like it (So far)
2/19/2011 c4 vampercy
update !
Oh and i percabeth
update !
Oh and i percabeth
2/19/2011 c4 Stygian.Wolf
wowww... heir crazy at the moment. its is really good so far. please update
wowww... heir crazy at the moment. its is really good so far. please update
2/7/2011 c3 Guest
Love. It. Who gets pregnant? It should be Annabeth and Perseus. Don't make it so Posidon and Athena are mad. Everyone does that b
Love. It. Who gets pregnant? It should be Annabeth and Perseus. Don't make it so Posidon and Athena are mad. Everyone does that b
2/6/2011 c2 Percy99
Update! Awesome story! Besides all the Glee mentioning I can forsee coming.
Update! Awesome story! Besides all the Glee mentioning I can forsee coming.
2/5/2011 c3 Guest
Please. Write. More. How much more can i say this... UR STORY ROCKS. Plx keep writing cause i cant digure out how to follow a story because i dont have an account of fanfiction.com.
Please. Write. More. How much more can i say this... UR STORY ROCKS. Plx keep writing cause i cant digure out how to follow a story because i dont have an account of fanfiction.com.
2/5/2011 c3 Percabeth lover 360
Ha! Ha! The big bang cast! Love your story! :)
Ha! Ha! The big bang cast! Love your story! :)
2/5/2011 c2 Guest
ZOMG THAT WUZ AMAZING!
ZOMG THAT WUZ AMAZING!