
5/24/2015 c2 Carrie
AMAZING
AMAZING
1/20/2015 c2 Breanna
Really good chapter
Really good chapter
11/22/2012 c2
1kailey12
Why does this ghost want the kids hurt? Who is he? A random guy or someone we know? Can't wait to read more!

Why does this ghost want the kids hurt? Who is he? A random guy or someone we know? Can't wait to read more!
11/22/2012 c1 kailey12
Woah intense! Hopefully the kids are ok! I know that Melinda and Jim will do everything they can to keep their family safe! Great story! Can't wait to read more!
Woah intense! Hopefully the kids are ok! I know that Melinda and Jim will do everything they can to keep their family safe! Great story! Can't wait to read more!
2/6/2011 c1 gwfan
continue please! pretty please!
continue please! pretty please!
2/6/2011 c1 Kailey12
Great start! Keep it going!
Great start! Keep it going!