for An Unlikely Hero3/8/2011 c1 
14Squabble
Another squirrel? I swear I saw another author with the word 'squirrel'. What's up with squirrels? Anyways, nice little story. I loved the part about cute villages. Reminds me of my squirrel rambling up there. I also love how Becker was all calm while Jess was freaking out. The way you ended the story was great! Closed it up nicely. I hope you write another story, my squirrelly friend.
14SquabbleAnother squirrel? I swear I saw another author with the word 'squirrel'. What's up with squirrels? Anyways, nice little story. I loved the part about cute villages. Reminds me of my squirrel rambling up there. I also love how Becker was all calm while Jess was freaking out. The way you ended the story was great! Closed it up nicely. I hope you write another story, my squirrelly friend.
2/21/2011 c1 Natt
Really good Freya, never knew u were such a good writer.
From Natt
Really good Freya, never knew u were such a good writer.
From Natt
2/3/2011 c1 The SquirrelMeerkat
Hi, Freya, it's me, Kira. Awesome story. LOL! squirrel!
Hi, Freya, it's me, Kira. Awesome story. LOL! squirrel!
2/3/2011 c1 Mia
Its good. Needs a bit of work and make it longer next time, but definate potential :)
Its good. Needs a bit of work and make it longer next time, but definate potential :)
2/3/2011 c1 17I-Can-Spell-Confusion-With-A-K
I love it! It was a great mix of humor, action, and Jess being scared/Jess saving the day. I also really love the way the story kind of ended up where it began. Things haven't really changed between them because deep down they knew going in what they would do for each other. So cute! My request would just be anything Jess/Becker, they are my new addiction at the moment. Although, I would love to see a missing scene from episode six *SPOILER IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN EPISODE 6* between Jess bringing him the food and her somehow ending up asleep on his shoulder, or a cute moment after the whole bomb thing... Anything Jecker would be appreciated! : )
17I-Can-Spell-Confusion-With-A-KI love it! It was a great mix of humor, action, and Jess being scared/Jess saving the day. I also really love the way the story kind of ended up where it began. Things haven't really changed between them because deep down they knew going in what they would do for each other. So cute! My request would just be anything Jess/Becker, they are my new addiction at the moment. Although, I would love to see a missing scene from episode six *SPOILER IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN EPISODE 6* between Jess bringing him the food and her somehow ending up asleep on his shoulder, or a cute moment after the whole bomb thing... Anything Jecker would be appreciated! : )