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2/3/2018 c1 DemeRain
Thanks for sharing.
1/25/2016 c1 1mayawene
merci
4/6/2013 c1 7AwfullyHardWork
Great story! :-) Chris's thoughts and feelings are totally in character with his personality. Poor guy, though! I mean, I understand why the Charmed Ones never considered that he could be related to them. After all, if somebody came to me from the future, especially if the one kept manipulating me all the time, I don't think I would ever think it could be my kin. On the other hand, it must be very frustrating not to be recognized by your own mother, especially if the mother died in your time. And when your mother starts to distrust you, it's even worse…

I liked the scene where Chris was hiding behind a bolder, waiting for the Charmed Ones to come. It could also explain how he knew where exactly to orb to vanquish the demon. I also liked the "making the moron vanquish himself with his own attack." It wasn't actually his fault that he vanquished himself, but I guess that doesn't make it any less moronic. :-D

"It would have been funny if it didn't hurt so much." - This sentence was… bittersweet. I've never before thought of finding their wary glances funny, but now that I think of it, the fact he is Piper's son and yet she seemed afraid of him makes it funny. And sad, too. It's just bittersweet. :-D

"Either he was really, really good or the 'Charmed' generation of his family meant the same as 'special'." - A great way to end this story. :-) Personally, I vote for "he was really, really good". Come on, Chris, you gotta be a little optimistic! :-D
3/22/2013 c1 3Dominus Trinus
While it’s unfair of Chris to expect the Halliwells to recognize him as family through his physical features, the being a half-whitelighter part should’ve send alarm bells ringing. But as you wonderfully summed it up:

“Either he was really, really good or the 'Charmed' generation of his family meant the same as 'special'.”

:-) Great one-shot!
3/20/2013 c1 107kirallie
Poor Chris. I agree with him, how blind are his parents and aunts?
8/17/2011 c1 3Horizon Gus Watson
Well, this was interesting... This was the first Charmed fic I have read... And I like it...:)
6/14/2011 c1 singlemompride
i like it if i didnt know any better i would have said this was like you 5th charmed fic or someting i really really like it!
2/5/2011 c1 1Fiction Ghost Writer
meant the same as special! TOO FUNNY!
2/4/2011 c1 heather XD
ROFL your a physcic! I was wtching this show yesterday!

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