for NGE: Asuka and Stupid Shinji Save the World1/1/2012 c4 
96Asukaforever92
Okay that was odd but kind off funny. I'm glad this is alive and I'll keep reading.
96Asukaforever92Okay that was odd but kind off funny. I'm glad this is alive and I'll keep reading.
12/30/2011 c4 CommieJohn
So... how did I end up in /b/, again?
Anyway, I like where this is headed. Carry on, please. That is, if you don't go insane before finishing. Jk, this is great.
But, if possible, a little more explanation about what's going on would be nice :P Or not. Insanity is nice.
So... how did I end up in /b/, again?
Anyway, I like where this is headed. Carry on, please. That is, if you don't go insane before finishing. Jk, this is great.
But, if possible, a little more explanation about what's going on would be nice :P Or not. Insanity is nice.
3/1/2011 c3 Asukaforever92
Okay I'm getting really lost now. Please explain this to me I want to keep reading but I don't know what is going on.
Okay I'm getting really lost now. Please explain this to me I want to keep reading but I don't know what is going on.
3/1/2011 c2 Asukaforever92
I am glad this was updated. Sorry it took me so long but my computer was giving me problems since February 7. The references to the Simpsons and Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson were good. I got your email and responded to it. Now I will read chapter 3 and probably comment on that.
I am glad this was updated. Sorry it took me so long but my computer was giving me problems since February 7. The references to the Simpsons and Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson were good. I got your email and responded to it. Now I will read chapter 3 and probably comment on that.
2/19/2011 c3 1Zelara
please please pleeeease set this to justify right. reading stuff set to center is an immense hassle. not to mention it looks weird.
1Zelaraplease please pleeeease set this to justify right. reading stuff set to center is an immense hassle. not to mention it looks weird.
2/11/2011 c2 2Weapon-VII
Heh this fic is getting a little... loopy? Ya loopy is a good word for it. And I love it! So now we are going into the Nobody Dies universe?
Keep up the good work!
2Weapon-VIIHeh this fic is getting a little... loopy? Ya loopy is a good word for it. And I love it! So now we are going into the Nobody Dies universe?
Keep up the good work!
2/10/2011 c2 Janrok24
This chapter was pretty cool, an improvement over the first one I'd say. I shall keep an eye on this fic.
This chapter was pretty cool, an improvement over the first one I'd say. I shall keep an eye on this fic.
2/9/2011 c1 Cthulhu
For some reason, this Shinji reminds me of Jeff Bridges. Namely, "The Dude" from The Big Lebowski.
I liked this chapter a lot, and I'll probably follow this story.
For some reason, this Shinji reminds me of Jeff Bridges. Namely, "The Dude" from The Big Lebowski.
I liked this chapter a lot, and I'll probably follow this story.
2/9/2011 c1 1Warboss Grock1
This looks like the good beginnings of a story, a little silly, but i hope to see more in the future.
1Warboss Grock1This looks like the good beginnings of a story, a little silly, but i hope to see more in the future.
2/5/2011 c1 1Incognito girl
A bit weird and unpolished, but funny. btw, it "breaking the 4th wall" ^_-
1Incognito girlA bit weird and unpolished, but funny. btw, it "breaking the 4th wall" ^_-
2/4/2011 c1 96Asukaforever92
Good so far. It was hard to tell who was talking at times so try and fix that but otherwise it was good and I will look for chapter 2.
96Asukaforever92Good so far. It was hard to tell who was talking at times so try and fix that but otherwise it was good and I will look for chapter 2.
2/4/2011 c1 2Weapon-VII
Oh sweet zombie Jesus! This sounds hilarious and awesome. Can not wait to read more. Update soon!
2Weapon-VIIOh sweet zombie Jesus! This sounds hilarious and awesome. Can not wait to read more. Update soon!
2/4/2011 c1 10YoungBoch
Awesome XD I can't wait for more. This was definitely worth the time to read! On suggestion though - at times, it's hard to follow exactly who's talking. Try throwing in hints as to who has the stage, so to speak (i.e. don't only use "he said" and "she said", but that goes without saying). Outside of that, awesome story, awesome humor, and I can't wait for more!
10YoungBochAwesome XD I can't wait for more. This was definitely worth the time to read! On suggestion though - at times, it's hard to follow exactly who's talking. Try throwing in hints as to who has the stage, so to speak (i.e. don't only use "he said" and "she said", but that goes without saying). Outside of that, awesome story, awesome humor, and I can't wait for more!