
2/18/2013 c1
9Zerousy
Okay, other than the fact that it's all scrunched up and everyone is talking in the same paragraph I love the idea of Aiden having a long lost daughter :)

Okay, other than the fact that it's all scrunched up and everyone is talking in the same paragraph I love the idea of Aiden having a long lost daughter :)
2/5/2011 c1
3One Shiny Mess
Interesting start. You might want to consider a different word processor, I think the one you used and ff.net may've had some compatibility issues. It ran a lot of your dialogue together.
And I think Aidan's about 200 years old. Between 200-250, I'd say. Bishop mentions it in the first or second episode. Good luck with your writing!

Interesting start. You might want to consider a different word processor, I think the one you used and ff.net may've had some compatibility issues. It ran a lot of your dialogue together.
And I think Aidan's about 200 years old. Between 200-250, I'd say. Bishop mentions it in the first or second episode. Good luck with your writing!