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muy buena
muy buena
9/6/2012 c1 
2Minor Augmentation
By far the most creative and original take on this! Love the development in this, as well as how you tied up everything! So realistic and everything!
Hope to be able to read another work of yours in the future!
2Minor AugmentationBy far the most creative and original take on this! Love the development in this, as well as how you tied up everything! So realistic and everything!
Hope to be able to read another work of yours in the future!
10/11/2011 c1 1TheRandomGirl
What you've written, it's actually quite original and realistic (by that I mean it makes sense for the characters and the mamodo world). One of the saddest things in the manga is that the partners have to be seperated in the end... I can totally imagine gash missing kiyomaro. The part about gash playing and then thinking about kiyomaro seemed like what gash would've done - he plays a lot but can be serious too. I think everyone was in character, even zeon. And the ending was nice :) thanks for writing this, I liked it!
1TheRandomGirlWhat you've written, it's actually quite original and realistic (by that I mean it makes sense for the characters and the mamodo world). One of the saddest things in the manga is that the partners have to be seperated in the end... I can totally imagine gash missing kiyomaro. The part about gash playing and then thinking about kiyomaro seemed like what gash would've done - he plays a lot but can be serious too. I think everyone was in character, even zeon. And the ending was nice :) thanks for writing this, I liked it!
2/25/2011 c1 3gabredi
This is great! The idea of humans going to the mamodo world when they die... so simple, yet so original! Great job!
3gabrediThis is great! The idea of humans going to the mamodo world when they die... so simple, yet so original! Great job!
2/6/2011 c1 26sora12212
Awwww! So cute! I love it! Zatch is 106 years old! *epic face* Great story, I also love Zeno~
26sora12212Awwww! So cute! I love it! Zatch is 106 years old! *epic face* Great story, I also love Zeno~
2/4/2011 c1 Sakutadaoffline
I like it. Only... I'm a little confused.
I like it. Only... I'm a little confused.
2/4/2011 c1 18CookiesxMilkEXCITEMe
No actually this was not lame.
This was the most original piece of writing that I've seen to tell you the truth.
A human child when he or she dies becomes a mamodo.
That is SO original!
I've never heard and/or thought of that before.
And I think of everything!
This is great but what I wanna know is, how do they look?
That's all and it's pretty much perfect.
Great keep up the great work.
-Saya on the iPad
18CookiesxMilkEXCITEMeNo actually this was not lame.
This was the most original piece of writing that I've seen to tell you the truth.
A human child when he or she dies becomes a mamodo.
That is SO original!
I've never heard and/or thought of that before.
And I think of everything!
This is great but what I wanna know is, how do they look?
That's all and it's pretty much perfect.
Great keep up the great work.
-Saya on the iPad